Hello Guys , I know many readers may dislike my work - but .... I am a new writer , and I am trying my best to improve my writing to express it nicely . Hope those who like it can go with me to the end . And as for the Powerful level , you have to see that OCs are trying to follow Kairos , so characters are rapidly becoming powerful in a similar way for the enemies ... Let's talk about the event of Frieza reviving in Dragonball Super - Frieza after realizing that Kakarot has become very powerful so to defeat him and the humiliation Frieza suffered in heaven - he practiced for 6 month and in just that time he became pl powerful enough to even defeat Super Saiyan Blue Vegeta ( Original Anime) * similar case is happening in this story because the MC is too powerful everyone is trying to catch up with him .. Think radically and logically [img=Feeling it]. Hope everyone keeps reading . I will keep improving my writing skills .

Hello Viewers, I have decided to Update all the chapters of the day together . So that , fans have fun reading the complete one scenario.

your story a lots of potential but if you use that story in a good way you are not even making your words in a right way whatever you are using is not doing it's job and you are skipping many things many time ok don't skip the timeline you should be able to add something in that line some sentences some word so we can know what he was doing at that are to make your story even bigger ad something like while he was doing some kind of incident happened that's why he gain some kind of power by giving a logical choices just like and interferes of a God but he is interfering in his own life you will not understand what I am trying to say so he can become what will become God the most powerful to me for that he need some kind of help and he can do the help for get the help on his own the plot is that he is helping his own just starting stages the wou ldhave been a good story but this kind of story is never return or if somebody does try that they just f*** up in the middle and leave the story because they can't think anything because I have read some similar story

É raro encontrar boas histórias do dragon ball z onde o personagem principal trabalha duro para ficar forte em vez de ser super forte desde o início por causa disso acho que sua história realmente muito boa além disso você equilibra muito bem o texto e a escrita estou muito achei que ficou muito bem feito😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

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early part is good, the pace if fast but not hard to accept for me, but the power level and the fighting is an absolute mess... here's hoping the author can revised them when the author re-check them

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