Hello Hello! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know that! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to answer your questions! Also, enjoy this work! I do them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thank you for reading! I will leave a warning here... Well, the inspiration is obvious, but I will not limit myself to just that. Have a good reading!

author plz stop writing new novels and focus on ending the ones you alr write

I'm at lost of words, I read this novel because I've read the previous works of the authors and liked them and because I thought the plot was similar to MTWABV but it turned to be better than a novel with just a plot similar to to MTWABV it has its own plot and twists I really liked reading. Highly recommended I'm feeling the same when I was reading MTWABV which was my first WebNovel hope the author continues to update chaps regularly.

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Who knew, I didn't read anything for a while and when I came back one of my favorite authors posted something, I honestly really like his writing style so I recommend it. I read up to Chapter 21 and the story is perfect, and with a touch of wanting more. I come to ask you, please, not to make a very large harem, like the one in Blood legacy (your other masterpiece) Thank you for your work, hugs from Brazil 🇧🇷

I’m really enjoying the story so far even tho only 12 chapters are released I will be following this book and waiting to see what happens

All I gotta say is that this novel of yours has a striking resemblance to MTWABV, the best example of this when Vergil and Sapphire met each other like Victor and Scathach but in a much better way. And also how he met Ada, Katherine, and Roxanne which is also pretty similar to how Victor met Violet, Ruby, and Sasha and it's also the fact that both of them are battle maniacs. But this is definitely better than the start of MTWABV in my humble opinion since Vergil's father is dead, and some of you may relate to this because- well you might already know what I'm talking about... So anyway, so far so good and I'm glad the harem won't be that big since as you have said that only 9-16 members will be in his harem if I remember correctly (or maybe it will get bigger but who knows?) and the grammar is also much better than MTWABV but I'm no expert because my English is average at best since it's not my first language either but it's definitely better. (I won't mind Felicia ({Vergil's mother}) getting in the harem since there's no father in this one but the others might not like it or maybe they will because I don't see any man as a perfect fit for her ({for now that is and this is also my lower part thinking}). And since she's still single I most preferably prefer that she stays single if you don't plan on putting her in the harem but this ain't my novel so who am I to say this?) Anyway, this is my review without actually saying what made this better than MTWABV or how the story actually goes but I'm too lazy for that🤣.

A good read for now. One of those books you can read without worrying. Grammar - 5 Stars [img=update] Characters - 5 Stars [img=proud] Plot - 5 Stars [img=recommend]

well, I'll be honest, the book is well written, it follows a really cool theme, the plot is awesome, and it's heading in a great direction, as a whole for the book, however, Cap 85: The potential made her release "liquids " gave me the feeling that it will follow in the same direction as that work that everyone knows which it is, and probably at the same time will have to keep only the 3 initial wives, or add their mothers (which is obviously going to happens), which would be a good number, but it will probably follow that path of HAREM, HAREM, HAREM. Which is something I honestly don't like, so Bruno Opinador is getting out. Thank you for your work, author. (Are you a woman? Some things in your work make it seem like you don't know the nature of men that well! 😆🫣