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2024-09-05 16:21

author plz stop writing new novels and focus on ending the ones you alr write

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DungeonHunter
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lol

Matthew_Atumanya
Matthew_AtumanyaLv13

lol

1_EyedKing
1_EyedKingLv13

Nah…author should just stop writing, period.

Red_eye_Devil
Red_eye_DevilLv2

nah author should stop earning.

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Cristianmr2003
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Daoist875KHS
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please help me find the fanfiction description: A young man dies alone, he had money and everything he wanted, he died (I don't remember how) and wakes up in space, he is told to choose the body of a character without magical powers, he chooses eirichi Tsugikuni from "blade dissecting demons" then he chooses Naruto's powers at the peak powers and sharingan (there were other abilities, but I don't remember which ones) then he wakes up in the world of "levelling up alone" he is Jin-woo's neighbor and childhood friend, (his parents died here too ) He becomes a hunter and helps Jin-woo with the monarchs., he has a harem of Jin-woo's sister, the woman who can't stand the smell, 1 Japanese s-rank hunter (black hair, red eyes like she was shown with cubes in the manga) and insect monarch (she was a queen in another world, but the monarchs came to her world and destroyed it and her body was captured by insect monarch), and it's like ( from this world on, he gets more girls ( he doesn't collect them like Pokemon, he only goes after those he loves ) ) then he finds out that his parents are not just people, but higher beings, and his power and memories have been sealed because his power is killing him and they are looking for a way to save him, there is also a fox inside him, this is his childhood friend, she is the embodiment of sin (I don't remember what) she helps restore strength and keeps it under control. after all the monarchs die, he moves to the world of "the beginning after the end" to become a teacher at the Xyrus school or whatever, he kills those people who wanted to get to this continent and capture it, he also saves that elf who was supposed to die in the dungeon and meets another woman who understands blacksmithing, then he moves In the world of the "omniscient reader", he seals his powers so that they won't find him. He got a job where he works. I don't remember further, I'm sorry if I described it badly, but PLEASE HELP ME FIND HIM!!!!!

Azriel_Origin
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DittleLick20
DittleLick20Lv4

All I gotta say is that this novel of yours has a striking resemblance to MTWABV, the best example of this when Vergil and Sapphire met each other like Victor and Scathach but in a much better way. And also how he met Ada, Katherine, and Roxanne which is also pretty similar to how Victor met Violet, Ruby, and Sasha and it's also the fact that both of them are battle maniacs. But this is definitely better than the start of MTWABV in my humble opinion since Vergil's father is dead, and some of you may relate to this because- well you might already know what I'm talking about... So anyway, so far so good and I'm glad the harem won't be that big since as you have said that only 9-16 members will be in his harem if I remember correctly (or maybe it will get bigger but who knows?) and the grammar is also much better than MTWABV but I'm no expert because my English is average at best since it's not my first language either but it's definitely better. (I won't mind Felicia ({Vergil's mother}) getting in the harem since there's no father in this one but the others might not like it or maybe they will because I don't see any man as a perfect fit for her ({for now that is and this is also my lower part thinking}). And since she's still single I most preferably prefer that she stays single if you don't plan on putting her in the harem but this ain't my novel so who am I to say this?) Anyway, this is my review without actually saying what made this better than MTWABV or how the story actually goes but I'm too lazy for that🤣.

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