MrCouchPotato

I liked your way of writing but at the latest chapter you ruined it by writing one liners like "your not what I expected " I still don't know why writers can't write a decent conversation where the characters don't talk with anime level one liners that makes the conversation seem fake. Real conversation happens with multiple line each turn not characters talking like they are giving Jojo stands..... it's a drop in quality.

Haa....Your writing style was unique before but now you started writing typical one liners like every other authors. Kinda disappointing.

I'm sorry to say but I'm prefering your story over hers a little bit.... 😁

Nobody does as aura farming as Jin. He is simply uncopyable.. 😂

Why does it feels like a couples spat??

I'm here for the mil-.. I mean mother bro, don't worry about it.

sigh...

It gets worse...just drop it for your own sanity.

MC