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DaoistS69MXMLv145mth
2024-09-16 14:00

Only reason It's not getting five stars is that the author uses both first and last name for every sentence with every character. "Dean Bruce thought this, Dean Bruce thought that." I lose immersion constantly. Just use one part of characters names for gods sake. Never read a novel that does this and I've read hundreds. Please stop spelling the full name every time, and I will change this review to five stars.

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Maneesh_BOSSLv4

Man....... My habit of checking comments before reading novels led me to read yours first. Now that I've started the novel, I find the use of full names distracting as well

Ellipse_arkLv12

Maneesh_BOSS:Man....... My habit of checking comments before reading novels led me to read yours first. Now that I've started the novel, I find the use of full names distracting as well
Cerberus_36Lv14

try read it as deeznut

IseeyouLv15

Only reason I won’t read this. That would raise my blood pressure with annoying it is

Missy_TiLv12

aww who knows, you might end up liking the novel.

Iseeyou:Only reason I won’t read this. That would raise my blood pressure with annoying it is
Abyss_LightLv4

true bro it only 3 chapter and there is 109 Dean Bruce thaen using 10 he/ him or I

Maneesh_BOSS:Man....... My habit of checking comments before reading novels led me to read yours first. Now that I've started the novel, I find the use of full names distracting as well
KacbReLv10

maybe you have never read Korean and Chinese novels

RikeriLv15

Yes, exactly, which means this a CN/KR novel which was translated and then they quick replaced the name to make it look like its a western original novel. I rather go look for the og

KacbRe:maybe you have never read Korean and Chinese novels
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