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Juan_Filippa
Juan_FilippaLv116mth
2024-10-30 09:42

una novela que la disfrute demasiado y la recomiendo totalmente

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

BWbear
4.0
264 Chs

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BWbear
BWbearAuthor

¡¡ muchas gracias por su apoyo! ¡¡ esto me motiva más!

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Lalo_Vazquez
Lalo_VazquezLv13

Hasta que llegas al 201...

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DaoistS69MXM
DaoistS69MXMLv14

Only reason It's not getting five stars is that the author uses both first and last name for every sentence with every character. "Dean Bruce thought this, Dean Bruce thought that." I lose immersion constantly. Just use one part of characters names for gods sake. Never read a novel that does this and I've read hundreds. Please stop spelling the full name every time, and I will change this review to five stars.

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Kurijoben
KurijobenLv15

Something changed. For the first 200 chapters I loved this novel. However, after Chapter 200, the quality drastically drops. - The pacing becomes way too fast - The story reads as if a different writer started writing this and they didn’t even bother to read the previous chapters. - Dean just gets a new personality and previous characters are just gone (system is gone too) The novel sucks now, but those first 200 chapters are still great.

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ACE_KinGz
ACE_KinGzLv14

5 star for first time Review ! !!!!!!!!¡!!!!

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brother_of_Thor
brother_of_ThorLv4

Reveal spoiler

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BigWhiteGoose
BigWhiteGooseLv1

I think this novel is well written, unlike some novels that are written at such a fast pace, it is a novel worth reading carefully. The plot is worth looking forward to. This novel needs to be read carefully and slowly to discover its brilliance!

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Paradon
ParadonLv15

Like many others have said, everything before chapter 200 is decent. Anything past chapter 200 is just obvious AI generated content that literally fails to maintain consistency even within the same chapter. It was by far the most confusing mess of words I have read on this website. Nobody even bothered to try and proof read what the AI spat out.

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Kuroi_Tsurugi
Kuroi_TsurugiLv12

The story started great and was tlreally fun to read, until it hits chapter 200 and becomes pure ai slop without any consitency towards everything that happened before, trying to pump as many words as possible to make chapters more expensive.

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Doubleyolkeggs
DoubleyolkeggsLv1

The plot of this novel is also fantastic! I am reading every novel of yours and will recommend it to others! that 's great! Can we update faster? I need more chapters!

7mth
Dangerlives
DangerlivesLv15

You should focus your energy on writing this story and not others. This is a good story.Not too much fluff.

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