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antmanFN
antmanFNLv148mth
2024-08-26 14:03

Its very hard to read and follow and the grammar needs to be fixes half he time idk whats going on

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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv14

Mc thinks and speaks like a person with severe untreated ADHD.

Meep_87644
Meep_87644Lv4

Why 4 stars then?

antmanFN
antmanFNLv14

i gave it 3

Meep_87644:Why 4 stars then?
Meep_87644
Meep_87644Lv4

Ah I’m blind it looked like 4

antmanFN:i gave it 3
Yagaht
YagahtLv1

Because it is a translation from Russian. You can spot it easily by speech starting with "-". And while source is not bad, I wouldn't call it really good. Story is nice, if somewhat forced or jumbled.

ghustV
ghustVLv5

yo, was this stolen? like the majority of the translated shi that "authors" ai-paste in this site? or is thi something like "i dunno english, so i translated my og lenguage to english"

Yagaht:Because it is a translation from Russian. You can spot it easily by speech starting with "-". And while source is not bad, I wouldn't call it really good. Story is nice, if somewhat forced or jumbled.
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