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Praise_TheSun
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2024-09-06 03:40

Could be better in writing Overall okay 👌🏻

Re: Goblin Slayer

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4.5
123 Chs

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FanFictionPremium
FanFictionPremiumAuthor

200 gems = bonus chapter 20 comments per chapter = bonus chapter 10 reviews = bonus chapter 3 patreon subscriptions = 10 bonus chapters

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antmanFN
antmanFNLv14

Its very hard to read and follow and the grammar needs to be fixes half he time idk whats going on

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GoldenZega606
GoldenZega606Lv1

This story caught me, it can improve, but in general it has a lot of potential, suspense, intrigue and the protagonist is easy to empathize with, he has well thought out waifu and he is not a silly villain, just an anti-hero with clear ideas and he is not afraid of success, when it has to do with girls, it has a lot of story, it has the essence of re mouster, with a gem of goblin slayer.

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Feyron
FeyronLv2

Its very hard to read and follow,the grammar needs to be fixes,and the story itself is good[img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]

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Elvenerable
ElvenerableLv2

Sigo con mi idea de por lo menos no haya muchas escenas escritas tuyas de duendes follandose chicas antes que el MC no se solo digo , O y una duda abra viajes mundiales?¿ en esta historia? Por cierto me encanta tu obra de reencarnado en akame ga kill

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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I don't care about the plot or the grammar, it's a Goblin Slayer fanfic so get 5 stars .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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DaoistM6FxNl
DaoistM6FxNlLv14

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Elvenerable
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Reveal spoiler

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Elemise
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