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Luffy001Lv51mth
2025-01-16 10:10

Meh. The story suffers from the same problem many other novels suffer from. It's too much of "Look of awesome the MC is". He returns to Earth with Cultivation so he can do what he wants. He is much stronger than Earthlings, he has cultivation means to spy on others and plenty other advantages but we are supposed to be impressed his lame schemes work? He doesn't know how to handle a business but he comes back from the Cultivation world with products not found on Earth, impossible to recreate for other people so he has a monopoly and earns tons of money and we are once again supposed to be impressed? I hate when a story can replace the MC by anybody and he would still be awesome. It means the MC has nothing to bring except his golden finger. I lasted 140 chapters before realizing I don't have anything to look forward in the story. Plot wise, the Cultivation world is boring, and on Earth, I already know he will dominate the market and crush competitor with lame schemes and not elaborate ones. In conclusion, while the story is alright for a time, I've become bored rapidly.

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bananahouseLv11

The beginning was definitely great in my opinion. That sense of danger for the MC though is gone by the chapters you mentioned. I also think more information on the businesses would be better since his secretary somehow can do everything💀

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RexHarrisLv14

From my experience the story starts really strong but once you hit towards the premium chapters (around 40) it falls off some. This is mainly because the Mc begins building a bigger power base in the real world, and anyone who has been around translated novels on this sight for a while knows what happens when there is a modern setting and Mc interacts with other countries. That made the novel a bit messy and unenjoyable to me. The premise of the story itself (coming back to the modern world for resources) s really exciting and hooked me strongly at first, but later at the story progresses you realize it can be limiting and cause problems later in the story. One example of this is there seems to be a strange plot hole where Mc can cultivate in our world with zero problems. Some of it is somewhat explained but other parts not really. There is also the issue of time. There are secondary characters in the real world, but time moves the same between worlds so unless the novel has the MC blitz like crazy (or being other people to cultivation world which is hard to do well) they will just sorta die off. The story would also go to the point where the author would have to make up a fictional future for the modern world because of time as well. Which I don’t trust to be satisfying in a Chinese novel. All of this said, the novle premise is pretty cool, the mc romances have detials, the side character are actually good and are better then the average card board ones, and the mc is a legit demonic cultivator (to an extent) which are all big pluses. So I still recommend giving it a try for a few chapters and if the issues I mention bother you drop it there and you can still have enjoyed a few chapters.

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