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2024-09-16 03:22

nothing plot worthy happens on 31 chapters “warrior training system” for one is a throw off he trains like twice in those 31 chapters his a submissive servant boy (if you like that good for you) and he’s just be toying with

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Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

pls go into detail about what u mean by servant boy , bc I have seen this kind of review and most of the time the reviewer overexaggerating about situation that isn't serious

RagingMutant
RagingMutantLv15

He’s a servant and he sits under the eldest daughter of the duke’s table as he massages her legs twice a day as she pretty much sexually assaults him. Even the her maids do things with him and he just sits there and takes it like a beta Japanese mc.

Daoist4MxvaV:pls go into detail about what u mean by servant boy , bc I have seen this kind of review and most of the time the reviewer overexaggerating about situation that isn't serious
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

ok so did u find out the reason the mc takes the suffering or did u find out something he could gain from enduring the abuse b4 u made the review

RagingMutant:He’s a servant and he sits under the eldest daughter of the duke’s table as he massages her legs twice a day as she pretty much sexually assaults him. Even the her maids do things with him and he just sits there and takes it like a beta Japanese mc.
Generic_007
Generic_007Lv4

No, he is just innocent and thinks she will reward him for everything feet massaging session....

Daoist4MxvaV:ok so did u find out the reason the mc takes the suffering or did u find out something he could gain from enduring the abuse b4 u made the review
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

does his character develop

Generic_007:No, he is just innocent and thinks she will reward him for everything feet massaging session....
dirtydew
dirtydewLv15

Yes, his character develops and turns into a bit of a manipulator after he awakens his power

Daoist4MxvaV:does his character develop
DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

And he is being rewarded….his system is being developed. You fellows just have a weird reaction to women whenever you’re not the “dominant alpha chad” you think you are

Generic_007:No, he is just innocent and thinks she will reward him for everything feet massaging session....
pendragon_
pendragon_Lv15

when does his character mature? i’m currently on chapter 38 & very curious about this bc if his current personality that i’m reading rn goes on till like chapter 100…😒

dirtydew:Yes, his character develops and turns into a bit of a manipulator after he awakens his power
dirtydew
dirtydewLv15

I couldn't tell you exactly when, I've been reading along since the beginning I think it's probably when he awakens his circle

pendragon_:when does his character mature? i’m currently on chapter 38 & very curious about this bc if his current personality that i’m reading rn goes on till like chapter 100…😒
Spen8tor
Spen8torLv15

Did you write this novel or are you just a blind dick sucker who is incapable of accepting others may think differently than them and have different opinions on story elements or progression?...

Daoist4MxvaV:ok so did u find out the reason the mc takes the suffering or did u find out something he could gain from enduring the abuse b4 u made the review
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

bro i was just asking questions to see if the book is worth reading so i don't waste my time , why do u have to be such fucking asshole about it , like seriously what's wrong with u

Spen8tor:Did you write this novel or are you just a blind dick sucker who is incapable of accepting others may think differently than them and have different opinions on story elements or progression?...
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Eldeel
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Score: 8/10 On first look one might think think this is just a shallow lustful fantasy novel. But if you were to look deeper you will notice that the book has very good writing quality and pace. And a very honest approach to the story premise. The mc in the story is a curious child with not much information about the world(very horny as well). And guess what the mc acts exactly as the description. He asks questions when something new comes up exactly like a child. He gets angry when he dosent get what he wants and happy when he gets it. He has a naive approach to life and is easily tricked by adults. He is oblivious to hidden information because he dosent have enough emotional experience. And I love this fact about this novel. So many books loose this aspect. In order to write a great saga they overdramatize the mc’s mindset. But this book really tries to be realistic. I as a reader dosent mind if a mc is stupid, simp, emo, cold hearted, shy, brave, etc. but I really hate conflicting behaviors. And this book does not do that at all. Another good thing is the system is not overbearing. So many system novels just make the mc into a freak of nature, giving them borrowed power in the form of free skills and stats. This system is very fair it’s more like an instructor which supports the natural growth of the mc. Everything the mc achieves is through his hard work with the guidance of the system. The pacing if the story is also good. My dosent just become best warrior in the kingdom in 2 months. He is still a kid learning how to fight, honing his basics by 2 months. One can really see how overtime the mc is getting comfortable with the surrounding cast. And there is a good breaks between big story events in a way to have a realistic picture. Only things that irritates me is that the mc is too smart abt the horny stuff early on. Because I always have to ask the question ‘how?’ In conclusion, don’t just judge this book by this cover, there is much more to this novel than it seems. If you are a fan of slow paced light hearted novels I think this one is a good choice.

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