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Krishna_Oza_0704
Krishna_Oza_0704Lv37mth
2024-10-07 05:06

liked the start but as it went around ch 15+, the story is going nowhere. like i am at chapter 35( while writing this review) but there is no major change in the story or developement. What does the system do, what he practices, or what is his thinking not much is mentioned. and its more like he is a side mob who we see in when only other characters are around.

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Samuel_Segun_3504
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Thought so too. Just got to chapter 16 but i couldn't take it anymore. I thought this was a gem

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Leon_Noxil
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Score: 8/10 On first look one might think think this is just a shallow lustful fantasy novel. But if you were to look deeper you will notice that the book has very good writing quality and pace. And a very honest approach to the story premise. The mc in the story is a curious child with not much information about the world(very horny as well). And guess what the mc acts exactly as the description. He asks questions when something new comes up exactly like a child. He gets angry when he dosent get what he wants and happy when he gets it. He has a naive approach to life and is easily tricked by adults. He is oblivious to hidden information because he dosent have enough emotional experience. And I love this fact about this novel. So many books loose this aspect. In order to write a great saga they overdramatize the mc’s mindset. But this book really tries to be realistic. I as a reader dosent mind if a mc is stupid, simp, emo, cold hearted, shy, brave, etc. but I really hate conflicting behaviors. And this book does not do that at all. Another good thing is the system is not overbearing. So many system novels just make the mc into a freak of nature, giving them borrowed power in the form of free skills and stats. This system is very fair it’s more like an instructor which supports the natural growth of the mc. Everything the mc achieves is through his hard work with the guidance of the system. The pacing if the story is also good. My dosent just become best warrior in the kingdom in 2 months. He is still a kid learning how to fight, honing his basics by 2 months. One can really see how overtime the mc is getting comfortable with the surrounding cast. And there is a good breaks between big story events in a way to have a realistic picture. Only things that irritates me is that the mc is too smart abt the horny stuff early on. Because I always have to ask the question ‘how?’ In conclusion, don’t just judge this book by this cover, there is much more to this novel than it seems. If you are a fan of slow paced light hearted novels I think this one is a good choice.

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