My god... I wanted to read a lord type novel, I'm very familiar with this sub-genre, and I'm also okay with the upgrade cheat, AND I had low expectations, just wanted something to pass time, but I cannot believe how bad it is. We are getting close to the 2024 and this is definitely the worst novel I've read this year. The flow of events are so random that I feel like someone wrote it while doing something else or even while drunk, or perhaps it's like it's written by chatgpt, because it doesn't feel natural at all. I've never seen a novel fail to explain its MCs cheat this badly. All system prompts seem to come randomly, sometimes upgrading, sometimes merging, MC power ups for no reason, there is no reasoning or structure or any weight. It's like I'm reading author's scattered thoughts rather than a story. Even the most basic story like "Oh I transmigrated, I have a territory to manage and my cheat is this, and I can use it like this and that" would be better. I'm not an author, and I'm pretty sure writing is harder than what it seems, but this is just not acceptable.
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