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2024-11-12 04:09

I read to chapter 82. in my opinion I would have really enjoyed reading this novel if it's basic framework would have been built better, it had been a lot more polished and they substituted the system for an actually powerful growth type talent. one of the biggest of of the novel is the system, its too broken spoilers but it makes Training his army completely irrelevant instead they all basically use an experience system because of that they got strong too fast but for some reason always struggle when fighting weaker enemies because they is a limit to how much a mob enemy can be strengthen before you trash the novel for making no sense so instead they give stupid reasons why the mc army is losing for convenience to actually have a fight scenes instead of a slaughter. the finally reason the novel isn't as good I wanted it to be is because of the mc, you would want to like him but it's hard, he is very stupid. I believe if the author removed the system and gave the mc a talent that can do what the system can do but as an actual talent and make it alot more natural making the training time in months and years, make the mc system support and help the designated people training faster and assist it breakthrough, give support while training combat techniques and ideas of new evolution methods for their pet beast but needing to get the materials themselves it would have been a whole lot better

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