FIRST REVIEW!!! HI3, HSR, AND DATE A LIVE?? Sign me UP. Author didn't cook a meal like I expected, he cooked up a full BANQUET. I'm really excited to read this just based off author's other work which I've loved and been following. I can expect great writing and story just based off that. P.S; I love you Author 🙏

Bro author I remeber in your last work you genderbent the MC I hope that weird shit won't happen here

i hope there's no gender bent MC shit again

This is perfect, It's among my top of fanfics I've read so far a pity there aren't many chapters son I'm gonna let it marinate and come back when it's 50+

Let's be honest, the story has potential, the author has good writing skills, the power system is balanced, but he is terrible at organizing the plot. The events are very superficial, the interaction with the characters is emotionless, the author focuses too much on explanations, some necessary, others not so much, the worst part is when he explains the same thing thousands of times in different ways, as if trying to increase the word count. Another negative point is that the protagonist has no memories, which doesn't look good in the plot. If you're going to make a fanfic, you should never put a reincarnated person without his greatest weapon, his memories. It's okay that this is "part of the character's development" but seriously, 50 chapters and I still haven't seen any progress. Good luck with the story for those who really liked it, if you like really fast stories, this is for you.

Quality work! Balanced, consistent, and very well thought out power scaling system. Very good character depiction and development, quite lively and each has its own characteristics. Quite a good depiction of World Building! Although in terms of the series of events in the Previous Era Timeline it seems too short which doesn't make sense(Referring to just a year's time all of these developments occurred, both technological developments, the successive Honkai Impacts and the bonds between the characters. Although some explain it as the Butterfly Effect). Well, it's all made up for by the overall solid and excellent narrative development! One of the best Honkai Impact Fanfics I've read so far! Although a bit rushed in the Timeline, the depiction of the Previous Era is very solid! Hopefully this work will not experience any obstacles or even drop/stop in the middle of the road! Thank you and keep up the good work Author!

In commemorate of Seele's birthday, I will leave my review here. Story progress so far had been stellar. Everything fits right into place so that you won't feel weird reading the story, though that might just be me who knows some things about HI3 ahead. The update also had been consistent I guess? I stopped at some point to let it cumulate but even then I already caught up again cause I read things too fast. So far I've nothing but praises to the author since they're able to write things so well with as little errors here and there. And what wasn't there in the canon, they fill it in just fine. Long story short, I'll recommended this fanfic to those who were looking for some Honkai Impact fanfic.

leí tu anterior historia por lo que se que escribes bien, lo único negativo que he observado hasta ahora con tu historia seria la falta de interacción de personajes, por ejemplo, el protagonista se reúne con otro personaje, escribes un párrafo de interacción y luego agregas al siguiente "siguieron hablando de ciertas cosas tal y tal" así que es mas contar que mostrar. I read your previous story so I know you write well, the only negative thing I've noticed so far with your story would be the lack of character interaction, for example, the protagonist meets another character, you write a paragraph of interaction and then add to the next "they continued talking about certain things such and such" so it's more telling than showing.

i dont usually do this but mahouka + date a live? i already sold