This is really bad. Objectively the grammar and syntax us fine and plenty readable, bit the character make absolutely no sense. He revives mikoto and 10 minutes later after seeing her dead husband's body, he suddenly remembers after lusting after her unconscious body that her husband is dead. She asks how he revived her amd he answers by answering a totally different question and she just accepts it? She doesn't push she doesn't demand it's like his non answer to a very very important and godlike ability is no big deal. Hard limits are imposed on certain abilities and immediately contradicted on the same chapter. This is one of the worst naruto fanfics I have ever read.
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Bro, just admit it— you are using a calculator 🧨
English please? Because your reply makes absolutely nonsense irregardless to my review. Much like the mc's reply to Mikotos question makes no sense.
Exotica_Pvt:Bro, just admit it— you are using a calculator 🧨
Chaddts:English please? Because your reply makes absolutely nonsense irregardless to my review. Much like the mc's reply to Mikotos question makes no sense.
it's not as bad as you say, but it's definitely not that good either. I'd give it 3-4 stars since it has the potential to be good if the author executes the rest of the story properly.
"That shit has so many typos I wouldn't be surprised if you told me you wrote it with a calculator" there I fixed it for you
Chaddts:English please? Because your reply makes absolutely nonsense irregardless to my review. Much like the mc's reply to Mikotos question makes no sense.
Exotica_Pvt:Bro, just admit it— you are using a calculator 🧨
so the MC doesn't answer mikoto and deflects just like you didn't respond to any of the criticism and deflected? Jesus christ let's hope the story isn't how this post describes it.
Exotica_Pvt:Bro, just admit it— you are using a calculator 🧨
did you read what you're replying to?
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Yep sorry wrong person.
DaoistObvious:did you read what you're replying to?
Translations or original 🤔❓❓❓👀
Exotica_Pvt:Bro, just admit it— you are using a calculator 🧨
