This is well translated, but the plot is not really my cup of tea, first of all, a good portion of this story, the protagonist’s beginning in this world is glossed over by starting us off at a point where he is powerful enough to beat Yagura and is already in an relationship with Mei, that takes almost all the stakes away from this story and we hadn’t even seen a simulation at that point. After that, we finally see the first simulation of the story and it’s in Konoha, like the description said, he gets into a relationship with Kushina in the simulation, which is fine, but Minato is weirdly mischaracterised here. He’s overly obsessive, and is in love with Kushina immediately while also being antagonistic to the protagonist, that just feels really out of character for someone who’s always depicted as a chill nice person. The protagonist and Minato both aren’t really likeable to me here and the randomness of a villain points addition doesn’t help. All that together doesn’t make it my cup of tea, but if you’re into a villain protagonist, you’d probably like this story.

It's a good fanfic, but the way I see it, it's more like a draft. It would be great if the story could be a lot more refined. Mc past / past abilities don't make sense, the mc's system was "explained", but tbh normal simulation would be thousand times better for this fanfic (the system contains different kinds of simulation functions that are not even used). Also the author introduces vilain points out of nowhere - this gives me the impression that author can give mc random system functions at any point in time, even though his system is already way beyond op. Also - mc can't be hurt in any way, he is ice logia in a ninja world after all...

an interesting work worth reading in your free time

PARA SER UNA TRADUCION, ESTA HACIENDO UNA MUY BUEN TRABAJO, ADEMAS DE QUE TE RESERVAS EL PODER DE EDITAR Y CREAR NUEVO CONTENIDO A PARTIR DE LO QUE TRADUCES. TENGO FULL ESPERANZA DE ESTE FAN FIC.

This book feels like a wet dream of a chinese retard. No hate for the Translator as I am sure he did a lot of work to make this more readable, in it's OG raw translated form, I might have dropped it on Ch 10 or earlier lol

sinceramente ya me aburrió, si me digieras que las corrompe y terminan haciendo las cosas de buena gana, eso seria un desarrollo interesante pero hasta ahora solo vi al MC repetir una y otra ves la misma táctica y me aburrió completamente. El MC es se puede describir como alguien que solo sabe hacer una solo cosa

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Honestly this has a great idea but the person writing this made it a pure power fantasy and his system giving him everything... its basically auto win button, there seemingly no personally growth in anyway both as characters or abilities.

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