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AllenCrossLv15mth
2024-09-16 04:13

What can I say, the translator works well, everything is readable. The speed of translation updates is excellent. Further on the story: honestly, in the beginning it was interesting. But the further you go, the more it just gets monotonous, just empty. The plot at this point has no appeal, everything is clichéd to the point of banality. Regarding the character designs, you could describe them as sparse, cliched. Have no underlying zest. The protagonist showed promise, but his sadistic tendencies after a couple of times cause only irritation. I do not recommend to read this story, here you will not hit anything at the moment, just a typical Chinese fanfic. But under a beer will do.

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MrBlackWingAuthor

Great review and thank you for your honesty. I can't defend the story because, well, I didn't write it. I'm sorry if it wasn't to your liking; that's all I can do. But it's clear that everyone is enjoying the translation, which is good. I also accept that the story at some points becomes superficial in emotions or incongruent feelings that the characters have in relation to their original counterparts. However, nevertheless, I could say that it's a good story to read, get interested in, laugh a little, and then move on to a story that really has some depth. Which is quite difficult to find, to be honest. Well, thank you for reading, for indirectly calling me a good translator, and for supporting my work. Good luck on your next fictional journey!

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