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AllenCross
AllenCrossLv12mth
2024-09-16 12:13

What can I say, the translator works well, everything is readable. The speed of translation updates is excellent. Further on the story: honestly, in the beginning it was interesting. But the further you go, the more it just gets monotonous, just empty. The plot at this point has no appeal, everything is clichéd to the point of banality. Regarding the character designs, you could describe them as sparse, cliched. Have no underlying zest. The protagonist showed promise, but his sadistic tendencies after a couple of times cause only irritation. I do not recommend to read this story, here you will not hit anything at the moment, just a typical Chinese fanfic. But under a beer will do.

Life Simulation: Propose Marriage To Kushina Uzumaki at the Beginning

MrBlackWing
4.7
189 Chs

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MrBlackWing
MrBlackWingAuthor

Great review and thank you for your honesty. I can't defend the story because, well, I didn't write it. I'm sorry if it wasn't to your liking; that's all I can do. But it's clear that everyone is enjoying the translation, which is good. I also accept that the story at some points becomes superficial in emotions or incongruent feelings that the characters have in relation to their original counterparts. However, nevertheless, I could say that it's a good story to read, get interested in, laugh a little, and then move on to a story that really has some depth. Which is quite difficult to find, to be honest. Well, thank you for reading, for indirectly calling me a good translator, and for supporting my work. Good luck on your next fictional journey!

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HardenedWood
HardenedWoodLv2

This is well translated, but the plot is not really my cup of tea, first of all, a good portion of this story, the protagonist’s beginning in this world is glossed over by starting us off at a point where he is powerful enough to beat Yagura and is already in an relationship with Mei, that takes almost all the stakes away from this story and we hadn’t even seen a simulation at that point. After that, we finally see the first simulation of the story and it’s in Konoha, like the description said, he gets into a relationship with Kushina in the simulation, which is fine, but Minato is weirdly mischaracterised here. He’s overly obsessive, and is in love with Kushina immediately while also being antagonistic to the protagonist, that just feels really out of character for someone who’s always depicted as a chill nice person. The protagonist and Minato both aren’t really likeable to me here and the randomness of a villain points addition doesn’t help. All that together doesn’t make it my cup of tea, but if you’re into a villain protagonist, you’d probably like this story.

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R0B
R0BLv2

It's a good fanfic, but the way I see it, it's more like a draft. It would be great if the story could be a lot more refined. Mc past / past abilities don't make sense, the mc's system was "explained", but tbh normal simulation would be thousand times better for this fanfic (the system contains different kinds of simulation functions that are not even used). Also the author introduces vilain points out of nowhere - this gives me the impression that author can give mc random system functions at any point in time, even though his system is already way beyond op. Also - mc can't be hurt in any way, he is ice logia in a ninja world after all...

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Bukkas
BukkasLv4

an interesting work worth reading in your free time

2mth
Leylin_123
Leylin_123Lv14

PARA SER UNA TRADUCION, ESTA HACIENDO UNA MUY BUEN TRABAJO, ADEMAS DE QUE TE RESERVAS EL PODER DE EDITAR Y CREAR NUEVO CONTENIDO A PARTIR DE LO QUE TRADUCES. TENGO FULL ESPERANZA DE ESTE FAN FIC.

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Zero_9758
Zero_9758Lv1

This book feels like a wet dream of a chinese retard. No hate for the Translator as I am sure he did a lot of work to make this more readable, in it's OG raw translated form, I might have dropped it on Ch 10 or earlier lol

1mth
AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

sinceramente ya me aburrió, si me digieras que las corrompe y terminan haciendo las cosas de buena gana, eso seria un desarrollo interesante pero hasta ahora solo vi al MC repetir una y otra ves la misma táctica y me aburrió completamente. El MC es se puede describir como alguien que solo sabe hacer una solo cosa

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DarkStarryLord
DarkStarryLordLv4

It's Simple and nothing to say but this is

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Defective_Angel
Defective_AngelLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Skeithking
SkeithkingLv14

Honestly this has a great idea but the person writing this made it a pure power fantasy and his system giving him everything... its basically auto win button, there seemingly no personally growth in anyway both as characters or abilities.

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