Started off string and was interesting for the most part. I had to drop if after a few chapters for 2 reasons 1. Massive 6 year time skip from age 6-12. At age 6 he was gaining 500 exp per slime kill and was lv 26. 6 whole years later he is only lv24 and he shows he was 10,000/14,000 from the next level. That’s 8 slimes. He is said “to have made a name for himself” and “completing a lot of missions” no he isn’t he is killing less than one alike a week. This is just so dumb I can’t 2. His brother Mike hating him so much is so horrible written and portraited. If you are going to have a revenge or betrayal ark from family at least make it readable. It’s so cringe and the fact no one does anything is so dumb. Overall if these 2 were fixed it would be a solid read. The absurd and terrible leveling though just makes the reader suspend belief more than a terrible MTL cultivation novel
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thank you for your time, appreciated. i do remember after the time skip i said he spent a lot of. his time adventuring, and training, but then again, i specifically said he kept it on a low, which meant it was from time to time, because he didn't want attention at that point yet, even though he still got it. also, another things is that the forest lacks the sort of beasts he needed to grow, unlike the labyrinth . also, don't expect me to juts kill a character because you don't like his behavior, the MC thinks about his family, how would they feel at the death of Mike? Mike is still family to Lia and Quin , and those are two people that Silva loves, so put one and two together . thank you for your time, your readership was appreciated, but since you can't accept the setup, I guess we will part here
the other reader isnt asking you to kill him off they are asking for a reasonable and logical writing, cus Mike's character is annoying boring and not even deep enough to be called one dimensional, how would you feel if dumbledore tried to kill Harry Potter every now and then for no reason? it would feel annoying cus it doesnt make any sense right? this plot is like when in trash cultivation novels someone comes to antagonise the mc because "antagonise the mc" but in those novels its short and only serves face slapping while here its too long to even see if there is purpose to it cus most people will probably drop this novel before the paywall chapter -_-
DepressedMage:thank you for your time, appreciated. i do remember after the time skip i said he spent a lot of. his time adventuring, and training, but then again, i specifically said he kept it on a low, which meant it was from time to time, because he didn't want attention at that point yet, even though he still got it. also, another things is that the forest lacks the sort of beasts he needed to grow, unlike the labyrinth . also, don't expect me to juts kill a character because you don't like his behavior, the MC thinks about his family, how would they feel at the death of Mike? Mike is still family to Lia and Quin , and those are two people that Silva loves, so put one and two together . thank you for your time, your readership was appreciated, but since you can't accept the setup, I guess we will part here
Those are all your personal feelings to be honest , not everyone can like what i do, to those that have read it, they have kept me going and are happy with the progression, those are who I write for✌️✌️
DepressedMage:thank you for your time, appreciated. i do remember after the time skip i said he spent a lot of. his time adventuring, and training, but then again, i specifically said he kept it on a low, which meant it was from time to time, because he didn't want attention at that point yet, even though he still got it. also, another things is that the forest lacks the sort of beasts he needed to grow, unlike the labyrinth . also, don't expect me to juts kill a character because you don't like his behavior, the MC thinks about his family, how would they feel at the death of Mike? Mike is still family to Lia and Quin , and those are two people that Silva loves, so put one and two together . thank you for your time, your readership was appreciated, but since you can't accept the setup, I guess we will part here
well said. this author clearly doesn't take criticism very well.
One_Comment_Man_5072:the other reader isnt asking you to kill him off they are asking for a reasonable and logical writing, cus Mike's character is annoying boring and not even deep enough to be called one dimensional, how would you feel if dumbledore tried to kill Harry Potter every now and then for no reason? it would feel annoying cus it doesnt make any sense right? this plot is like when in trash cultivation novels someone comes to antagonise the mc because "antagonise the mc" but in those novels its short and only serves face slapping while here its too long to even see if there is purpose to it cus most people will probably drop this novel before the paywall chapter -_-
he enters the labirynth at lvl24 10K/14k exp to level up. kills 7 goblins 3500exp then kills a hobgoblin 1000exp plus he has a skill to increase exp gain he uses, adding another 900 exp for that mob, gaining a total of 5400exp. *checks status screen* lvl 24 13K/14K. so yeah im done with this.
what better way to take criticism than that? I do love the fact that he gave the story a try, but now he can't take it, and I explain what he is missing and also tell him that he can drop it if he doesn't like the story, and boom, all of a sudden I can't take criticism. when people try to act in ways to avoid conflict, you all pull out gas to throw in nearly non existent flames. do you feel I love to lose a reader? but the majority liked what happens in the story, so placing one against the majority, do you see the math now?
drunken_master55:well said. this author clearly doesn't take criticism very well.
why is mc's basic stat(without ×10) so low
it do seems that ur brain is not braining and math is not mathing for u Author. IT is Insane that u dont get the point that the feud mike and silva have is as non logical as the pay wall at 28
DepressedMage:what better way to take criticism than that? I do love the fact that he gave the story a try, but now he can't take it, and I explain what he is missing and also tell him that he can drop it if he doesn't like the story, and boom, all of a sudden I can't take criticism. when people try to act in ways to avoid conflict, you all pull out gas to throw in nearly non existent flames. do you feel I love to lose a reader? but the majority liked what happens in the story, so placing one against the majority, do you see the math now?
okay, noted
Requien:it do seems that ur brain is not braining and math is not mathing for u Author. IT is Insane that u dont get the point that the feud mike and silva have is as non logical as the pay wall at 28
thx man saved me from wasting time ..
