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Iron_Man_3000
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2024-10-20 02:47

Great story but could use more raw writing than AI editing

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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

And how did you determine that it is AI relying on unreliable AI detector's??? because if so that is quite inaccurate or did you actually read it and see if it has emotions and shows more than tells??? like bro you gotta actually add proof to the equation so that you aren't another person who goes around making false assumptions like those freaks on twitter, otherwise I can't trust your review I'm sorry that's just how it is

Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14

There are certain words that sneak in.. like palpable , connections, reality. I see those word come up a lot personally when I use ChatGPT myself. Plus it’s my personal opinion… don’t take it as fact my guy.

EyeOfSilver:And how did you determine that it is AI relying on unreliable AI detector's??? because if so that is quite inaccurate or did you actually read it and see if it has emotions and shows more than tells??? like bro you gotta actually add proof to the equation so that you aren't another person who goes around making false assumptions like those freaks on twitter, otherwise I can't trust your review I'm sorry that's just how it is
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Sorry but your wrong read a real book sometime and you will more than just palpable and hate to say it your wrong again the book was fine I read all chapters barely any use of AI at best it was grammar checked by AI but written by a human so sorry to burst your edgelord bubble.

Iron_Man_3000:There are certain words that sneak in.. like palpable , connections, reality. I see those word come up a lot personally when I use ChatGPT myself. Plus it’s my personal opinion… don’t take it as fact my guy.
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

No I didnt take what u said as fact I just asked for evidence and Instead I got a edgelord who uses... as if its some sort of demeaning way well its not its supposed to represent off thought or incomplete thoughts like "Fury you've got to see this it's well..." like that not in some edgelord cringe way

Iron_Man_3000:There are certain words that sneak in.. like palpable , connections, reality. I see those word come up a lot personally when I use ChatGPT myself. Plus it’s my personal opinion… don’t take it as fact my guy.
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

I tell what dumb dumb do you know what connotations means?

Iron_Man_3000:There are certain words that sneak in.. like palpable , connections, reality. I see those word come up a lot personally when I use ChatGPT myself. Plus it’s my personal opinion… don’t take it as fact my guy.
Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14

I’m just going to ignore the insult and ignore this story.

EyeOfSilver:I tell what dumb dumb do you know what connotations means?
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Sorry your reply doesn't matter since you took too many business days to respond so your response expired.

Iron_Man_3000:I’m just going to ignore the insult and ignore this story.
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