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Delusion10
Delusion10Author6mth
2024-08-15 11:55

Giving myself a 5-star review because I can. Anyhow, if you're reading this, please drop a review regarding how you feel about the direction this fanfic is taking. Obviously, as of writing this I only have 1 chapter out, but as I create more chapters in the future, whether it's the plot or character interaction, let me know how you feel about the story or what I can improve on as a writer!

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Sokk3
Sokk3Lv4

Bro when are you gonna update your overlord fic or did you drop it

Delusion10
Delusion10Author

I plan on re-writing it in the future to iron out the start. Once that's done I'll continue it

Sokk3:Bro when are you gonna update your overlord fic or did you drop it
MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5

meanwhile the mha story:

Delusion10:I plan on re-writing it in the future to iron out the start. Once that's done I'll continue it
Delusion10
Delusion10Author

It was garbage anyways, maybe one day I'll rewrite that too

MrIIIo:meanwhile the mha story:
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MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5

hahaha, it had an interesting idea behind it. but yeah, it has a lot of bad parts to it too

Delusion10:It was garbage anyways, maybe one day I'll rewrite that too
Gman2123
Gman2123Lv14

When an author says they are rewriting a fic 90% of the time it never happens or it the rewrite gets axed less than a quarter of the way of the original story if not a few chapters. Not hating on you, just saying from my observations

Delusion10:I plan on re-writing it in the future to iron out the start. Once that's done I'll continue it
M7md_Star
M7md_StarLv3

hey dude do u still want to write this ff or did you give it up cause I am interested in writing about it

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