Item: Seclusion System: Exile to Ascendance
Rating: 4.4
Author: DreamReaper

DreamReaperLv22mth

2024-09-02 16:17

The first chapter is quite lengthy. MC was just introduced like a Pokémon battle and got himself kicked out. The detail surrounding the MC is greatly appreciated if you can add it to add story depth from MC's perspective. The travel within the mystical forest was too rushed. It's like I'm skipping a day on leg work. End the first chapter from either of this points. Him getting kicked out or Him with the statue.

Seclusion System: Exile to Ascendance

WanderingShadow1

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WanderingShadow1Author

Hoi! I'm back with my shameless face °•°... Welp from this day onwards... the journey of feng chen starts once again but with a better style of writing haha.. Anyways if u have any questions u can ask here!

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Dune_LoneLv15

Pretty lame honestly I don’t recommend author tried to hard and made the system interactions nigh unreadable(but it depends if that’s ur type of humor you could like it) basically this book would be great for some especially to pass time but for some it gets unreadable fast check it out and see if it suits ur taste I guess.

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StapleheadLv3

I first admired this book from the adventurous and paradisical world. The pace is wonderful, and upfront I'll like to say the craft of the Tianlang Continent is the version of wondrous earth I want to be on. Plus with the underlying tints of darkness, you can be sure the serenity won't last forever. And so I held my breath for the page-turner. The author didn't disappoint. I'm rooting for Fengchen to stake as an adept Qi Cultivator. But I also don't want a pampered path to Dao Master... I want him worthy. Because part of the attraction of Seclusion System: Exile to Ascendance is that the banished member of an elite clan gets to redeem himself. It's a thought-out voice, wonderful for escaping into transcendental realms.

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Ekekwe_DaveLv3

Feels like i am reading a magic novel, it doesn't feel like cultivation at all

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HaremKing777Lv12

Feng Chen is the unfortunate victim of misfortune and can't cultivate for the first 14 years of his life. I don't know about you but I couldn’t live in a world like that. I'd try to find a way back home. But not Feng Chen, he holds on and suffers the abuse and humiliation until FINALLY he is able to cultivate his hidden powers. I highly recommend you at least give it a try, and you might be surprised by how good it is.

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