Item: Seclusion System: Exile to Ascendance
Rating: 2
Author: Ethernal7

Ethernal7Lv44mth

2024-11-21 11:48

Well, it's a real OP MC so that's fun and some jokes hit. But chapter after chapter is just MC and system whining about something or another. Yeah, there some hints on why they're acting so annoying, but that doesn't make less annoying or more intresting. I just skimmed through most of it, found no reason to keep reading other than hoping the "real story" would start soon. But, i've run out of patience. To any readers that like OP MC's and have time to kill, read a few chapters at a time or you'll probably burn yourself out. To the author, if you know you're gonna make your MC annoying, give the readers a better reason to keep going other than "mystery", or just make the "build-up" quicker.

Seclusion System: Exile to Ascendance

WanderingShadow1

4.1

84 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies5

WanderingShadow1Author

on god i seriously cant help it at all. the book was for those who had some serious amount of patience... and ngl i found more such people than i thought... and i am happy for that... the only reason i had put premium on ch 50 was to make the readers as annoyed as possible because that the borderline that i drew for any reader to get to read the book... lets just say it was my own personal wish as an author... and yes i did recieve alot of criticism cuz of that but fk it all... that amount of buildup was required both logically and practically or the story wouldn't have been convincing enough... the way the story was supposed to go into was just a bit unique kinda path... im happy that u gave the book a genuine try and thanks for reading thus far... thank you very much!

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Ethernal7Lv4

I dont understand why your story required all that but if you're happy with it, go off man

WanderingShadow1:on god i seriously cant help it at all. the book was for those who had some serious amount of patience... and ngl i found more such people than i thought... and i am happy for that... the only reason i had put premium on ch 50 was to make the readers as annoyed as possible because that the borderline that i drew for any reader to get to read the book... lets just say it was my own personal wish as an author... and yes i did recieve alot of criticism cuz of that but fk it all... that amount of buildup was required both logically and practically or the story wouldn't have been convincing enough... the way the story was supposed to go into was just a bit unique kinda path... im happy that u gave the book a genuine try and thanks for reading thus far... thank you very much!

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WanderingShadow1Author

lets just say it was nothing more than my own personal wish... or u could say me being selfish kek..

Ethernal7:I dont understand why your story required all that but if you're happy with it, go off man

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Ethernal7Lv4

This is why artistic people are weird. Always making the strangest descions😑

WanderingShadow1:lets just say it was nothing more than my own personal wish... or u could say me being selfish kek..

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WanderingShadow1Author

haha not really lol... i mean its better for people to ditch the book without getting to know the real story and all, throw whatever criticism they have towards me than to read the story first and have that lingering thought... maybe the story wasnt my type...

Ethernal7:This is why artistic people are weird. Always making the strangest descions😑

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