So very extremely slow. It’s full of info dumps that honestly just won’t matter later into the story, and the author isn’t good at writing fight scenes like at all unfortunately. The only interesting part about this that kept me reading is seeing people’s reactions to him being strong, but the author made it so that even though man god and nanohoshi probably won’t appear, the MC hides his strength. He also made the mana disaster just not happen, so now there’s genuinely like no action at all besides him training with Eris Writing Quality: 4/5. Not perfect, but there are nearly no mistakes. Updating Stability: 4/5. Honestly didn’t care for that so 4 as well I guess. Story Development: 2/5. Honestly it seems to be nearly all the same as canon, except for things happen earlier. Not sure why either since nothing different happens. Useless change. Character Design: 1/5. I honestly didn’t get attached to the main character like at all. Nothing is different or unique about him. He seems like a random boring dude who reincarnated but a little smarter. World background: 2/5. Would be a 4 since it’s just the Mushoku tensei background and everything, but you seem to add things that just make the story go slower and lose pace and action.
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LIKEI mean really, the entire story is him studying magic. And there’s not really a problem with him studying a lot, but at least try to balance it better. The story is 75-80% info dumps on magic, and 20-25% actual story
wait how could he stop Mana disaster? did it not happen bcz of Dimensional space time rift in the original series LN?
Basically made it so it’s an alternate universe with no man god, nanohoshi, or mama disaster. Pointless changes that make the story worse
6_Kartik_Rawat_9:wait how could he stop Mana disaster? did it not happen bcz of Dimensional space time rift in the original series LN?
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6_Kartik_Rawat_9:wait how could he stop Mana disaster? did it not happen bcz of Dimensional space time rift in the original series LN?
That's incorrect. Naturally, the Man-God is somewhere out there. Why would he not be there? Hitogami vs Orsted war is a natural part of this world, and the MC would be pulled into it eventually, along with the Laplace war and other events. You can see thanks to it, together with some of the other paragraphs here and their vibe, that this review clearly has to be taken with a grain of salt, and it tells you what kind of person the reader is. Many statements are simply incorrect or are overblown. And there aren't even any fight scenes yet, just stomping, and the MC planned to reveal some of his strength one chapter after doing reconnaissance and after investigating the orb, but I don't think the reader had read that far. I know there is no point in arguing though. It is true that the story is slow paced and focused on the magic system. Studying magic of that world with logic is the foundation of MC's strength and the core of the FANFICTION, it is not just pasting infodumps, I wish it was that east, but people can still find it boring and that's fine. However, I should logically simply take down this review simply because it's full of major spoilers. In truth, I would have been personally embarrassed to post something like this when the arguments are so untrue, unreasonable and a bit delusional. I feel that a single disagreeable sentence with 2 stars would be more reasonable in comparison.
The answer you got is not quite right. Of course, Hitaogami is naturally a part of the world. It is a spoiler, but Nanahoshi was never summoned there in the first place, so that's why the Mana Calamity doesn't happen. This Mushoku Tensei world is connected to the MC's universe and Earth, rather than being a novel world where he was thrown into by a ROB. The Mana Disaster doesn't happen because the events in the future related to the 'Miko from the Future' were different, because the MC is not from Nanahoshi's Earth. A cumulative chapter 21 explains it well, since you already know that much, you might as well skip and read it directly, if you have any interest (if). However, the Mana Disaster not happening doesn't stop the plot from happening. The only result is that Roa, the Boreas family and Sylphy's family don't get eradicated, opening a possibility of various political plots and possible kingdom building, and the MC isn't forcefully teleported to the Demon Continent. If the MC wants to get a Demon Eye, he'd have to go there himself. He also cannot rely on Nanahoshi for summoning magic study, and has to research these things himself.
6_Kartik_Rawat_9:wait how could he stop Mana disaster? did it not happen bcz of Dimensional space time rift in the original series LN?
Are you dumb? Go to any review on webnovel and there’ll be spoilers. The spoiler tag is rarely used, ape
Jaed21:That's incorrect. Naturally, the Man-God is somewhere out there. Why would he not be there? Hitogami vs Orsted war is a natural part of this world, and the MC would be pulled into it eventually, along with the Laplace war and other events. You can see thanks to it, together with some of the other paragraphs here and their vibe, that this review clearly has to be taken with a grain of salt, and it tells you what kind of person the reader is. Many statements are simply incorrect or are overblown. And there aren't even any fight scenes yet, just stomping, and the MC planned to reveal some of his strength one chapter after doing reconnaissance and after investigating the orb, but I don't think the reader had read that far. I know there is no point in arguing though. It is true that the story is slow paced and focused on the magic system. Studying magic of that world with logic is the foundation of MC's strength and the core of the FANFICTION, it is not just pasting infodumps, I wish it was that east, but people can still find it boring and that's fine. However, I should logically simply take down this review simply because it's full of major spoilers. In truth, I would have been personally embarrassed to post something like this when the arguments are so untrue, unreasonable and a bit delusional. I feel that a single disagreeable sentence with 2 stars would be more reasonable in comparison.
