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2024-10-05 15:35

No words to describe how good this is... fully recommend, any opinion i gave, author was ahead of me and implemented them in the same chapter i was commenting on. My only request is that Sylphy grows her hair to the waist and that you teach Roxy how to increase her mana capacity and make her reach at least empêror rank in magic if not gôd level. Same for sylphy. And not in just one magic, but in at least half. As for Eris, sword gôd. It would be also good to teach Zenîth advanced healing and detôx magic and power up Paul to at least emperor rank in a decade or so.

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