The writing is good Characters are good but I don’t feel like anyone other than MC will ever get fleshed out It feels like the MC will never loose, which if you like I guess that’s good but otherwise it’s bad Battles are unique and nice which is its strong suit The pokemon the mc uses don’t feel fleshed out To be honest the story is alright it’s good but it could be way better There is a lot of potential in the novel but it is all ruined because of the system. now to people who like system still hear me out. I like systems but only when they are given to mc who either need them or make it interesting. The MC does not need the system he is the sun of a billionaire and posses unique ability(which I am okay with since other people in the world posses them). He does need the system in anyway Honestly to put it into my perspective In one of the latest chp someone goes “wow I wonder how he got so strong it’s so unfair , I wonder who thought him”. And I was like the system the system is literally spoonfeeding him. The novel is so close to perfection, if you want to read for wish fulfillment read it. It’s a really good novel if that’s what you are searching for
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Dificilmente o MC de uma fic chinesa perde, eles são a encarnação da vitória, literalmente.
I'm fine with some systems in fanfics but this one feels the most arbitrary We were able to see some results of the MC's labor with his battle with Gary Then the system just instantly comes in and it'll make many of the MC's future battles somewhat pointless (I used to be a person who didn't care if the mc used a system but with the flood of systems everywhere and many of them just (as you say) spoon-feeding the MC's everything they can want and more but that gets tiring after the 100th time)
