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Vha_Ann
Vha_AnnAuthor7mth
2024-08-26 13:10

Yeah, really bad fic, writing is mid and lazy. author just doing whatever he wants with the plot and the grammar is horrible! Pretty funny story tho, I love the humor! But! Why did the author make Deadpool as Wolverine's son! I don't know what the author smoke but I dont think its legal and safe! So many plot holes too! not recommended!

Am I Deadpool???

Vha_Ann
4.3
39 Chs

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Guy85
Guy85Lv14

Need that author smoke

7mth
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n0_cl0ut
n0_cl0utLv4

I love crazy, schizophrenic mc’s. Good job author. I do hope tho that you’d be able to mass release or at least speed up the uploads, if you can.

8mth

TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

grammar is mid, Story is mid, the way author writes the chapters is confusing, way too much of the talking is about the author, who no one cares about, or that its a fanfic, instead of focusing on the story. Overall mid/10

7mth
Sylar_in_7
Sylar_in_7Lv10

deux etoiles a cause d'une voix dans la tête. je trouverais ca trop relou si je me reincarnai, dommage c'est presque parfait...... ....................

8mth
Bebek_Kucing
Bebek_KucingLv1

Pretty good for chapter 1 and pretty entertaining so far. The narrative jumps around quite a bit, which seems intentional to reflect MC's chaotic state of mind. However, some readers probably might find it difficult to follow. Maybe consider adding a bit more structure to the flow of thoughts to help guide the reader through the story. I am also gonna updated my review as the time goes...

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ORIGINofALL
ORIGINofALLLv4

if you are a deadpool and wolverine fan there is no way in 7 hells that you won't like this marvel jesus and hope author updates as soon as possible and yet did I say this is one of my most fav deadpool fanfic

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Spectre_67
Spectre_67Lv4

I love the story and its humor. Before this I never thought someone could write Deadpool, but the way you write him makes me believe that you yourself are suffering from DID, which is cool I guess as long as you give us quality content.

8mth
Machiel_schipper
Machiel_schipperLv4

It is a good story and I hope that you can see the story through to the end

8mth
AkGreyback
AkGreybackLv2

Crazy Best Fanfiction, people If you love Crazy 🤪 Mc as much as me, this one will be the thing which you have to read it, its funny and entertaining as hell, Personal opinion i felt like i was watching Deadpool movie..............................................

8mth
Guy85
Guy85Lv14

This is the best Deadpool fanfic I have read.

8mth
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