Item: Am I Deadpool???
Rating: 4.6
Author: Bebek_Kucing

Bebek_KucingLv19mth

2024-08-10 04:44

Pretty good for chapter 1 and pretty entertaining so far. The narrative jumps around quite a bit, which seems intentional to reflect MC's chaotic state of mind. However, some readers probably might find it difficult to follow. Maybe consider adding a bit more structure to the flow of thoughts to help guide the reader through the story. I am also gonna updated my review as the time goes...

Am I Deadpool???

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