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Accel14
Accel14Author7mth
2024-08-16 16:20

Thought I should make some things clear about this story here. 1. Keep in mind that the Villain tag is there for a reason. 2. He will not reincarnate as a Devil, so if you're one of the people who don't like reincarnated MC stories then this might be to your liking. 3. There will be occasional smut chapters, but they will be very far and few between. Though it exists in this story, it is not the focus of it. If you have any more questions, you can leave them here and I'll respond when I get the chance to.

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Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1

Incase hoping for this to be an isekai and just not labeled, bummer it's not.

machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Is rias going to end up with issei? I don’t even care if she is a love interest to the mc or not, but issei is just to annoying, he would be better as simply a comedic relief in the story, someone for the mc to mess with from time to time

Accel14
Accel14Author

I probably plan to let Rias and Issei be together, thing is though the Germory peerage is only really a focus for the first part of the story. After that the focus will pretty much just be on the MC and his team. Reasoning is, Rias and the MC don't go well together, so I have no reason to create any altered romance for her.

machadogbc:Is rias going to end up with issei? I don’t even care if she is a love interest to the mc or not, but issei is just to annoying, he would be better as simply a comedic relief in the story, someone for the mc to mess with from time to time
Discarded
DiscardedLv4

awesome. ive been looking for this information. now i can walk away without regret. good luck

Accel14:I probably plan to let Rias and Issei be together, thing is though the Germory peerage is only really a focus for the first part of the story. After that the focus will pretty much just be on the MC and his team. Reasoning is, Rias and the MC don't go well together, so I have no reason to create any altered romance for her.
literl010
literl010Lv1

Is there going to be a lot of Issei in this fic? I really can't stand the guy, especially when he's not the MC.

Accel14:I probably plan to let Rias and Issei be together, thing is though the Germory peerage is only really a focus for the first part of the story. After that the focus will pretty much just be on the MC and his team. Reasoning is, Rias and the MC don't go well together, so I have no reason to create any altered romance for her.
Accel14
Accel14Author

He appears now and then for the first part, and then you'll barely see em.

literl010:Is there going to be a lot of Issei in this fic? I really can't stand the guy, especially when he's not the MC.
Accel14
Accel14Author

What does that even mean "still feels like NTR", Rias and him have NO romantic relationship. Do you even know what NTR means?

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Attacker
AttackerLv15

I agree with you, but it wouldn’t be NTR—it just feels wrong. (Probably because I hate Issei.) But this novel already has some issues. I mean, Akeno suddenly becoming a yandere without any development or reason, just because the author likes yanderes; the MC’s sudden personality change; and being lovey-dovey with Raynare, just because she’s the author’s type or something.😂 Still, personally, I’m enjoying this fanfic so far and will probably subscribe to the Patreon—just waiting a little longer.

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Accel14
Accel14Author

The fact that a relationship happening totally seperate, with no connection to the MC whatsoever even remotely feels like NTR to you, makes you a clown.

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Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

He does have a very vague point tho , not letting Issei have the chick won't affect your story , you could have done that. That's what he is going for , if you not gonna take her then no need to give her

Accel14:The fact that a relationship happening totally seperate, with no connection to the MC whatsoever even remotely feels like NTR to you, makes you a clown.
NO_YURI_000
NO_YURI_000Lv4

Ignore them bro/sis whoever you are, they are the people who self insert in all stories , and they want reias but there’s no romance whatsoever between MC and reias so that’s why they feel like it’s NTR if she’s not with our MC and are with the Original protagonist ……. Anyway I got sidetracked I want to ask if there’s yuri in harem ???

Accel14:The fact that a relationship happening totally seperate, with no connection to the MC whatsoever even remotely feels like NTR to you, makes you a clown.
cafreine
cafreineLv4

who tf is Reias?

NO_YURI_000:Ignore them bro/sis whoever you are, they are the people who self insert in all stories , and they want reias but there’s no romance whatsoever between MC and reias so that’s why they feel like it’s NTR if she’s not with our MC and are with the Original protagonist ……. Anyway I got sidetracked I want to ask if there’s yuri in harem ???
cafreine
cafreineLv4

the cover img is Suzaku Himejima right? is she part of MC harem?

Accel14:I probably plan to let Rias and Issei be together, thing is though the Germory peerage is only really a focus for the first part of the story. After that the focus will pretty much just be on the MC and his team. Reasoning is, Rias and the MC don't go well together, so I have no reason to create any altered romance for her.
NO_YURI_000
NO_YURI_000Lv4

Sorry Rias

cafreine:who tf is Reias?
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Discarded
DiscardedLv4

too bad. rias best girl.

Accel14:I probably plan to let Rias and Issei be together, thing is though the Germory peerage is only really a focus for the first part of the story. After that the focus will pretty much just be on the MC and his team. Reasoning is, Rias and the MC don't go well together, so I have no reason to create any altered romance for her.
shrinemaiden
shrinemaidenLv2

Hahahah. You're getting cucked in you're mind because 4.06 billion women are not in a relationship with you LOL. Also "everyone would say" Nah, you're just crazy.

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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Nice alt bro, account made in 2023 with only 4 comments? All of them here? 0 hours reading? 2/10 Put more work in to make it believable

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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Lol

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Discarded
DiscardedLv4

dude you sound like speaking for yourself

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DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Can you make rias and grefia in his harem.

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FollMystery
FollMysteryLv1

The conclusion I came to after reading it was that it is rushed, from the protagonist to the way some characters act or little explanation about their abilities, not just how Mc uses these abilities but how they fictionalize the world in general because the author changed both. many things in the "magic system" that were supposed to affect and change the entire world of the original dxd. 1•The protagonist: He is Chūnibyō inside his head I felt he was a rational person, a little grumpy, of course inside his head because the Author wanted a cosplay of Aizer as Mc on the outside he is very polite at the same time which can be rude sometimes now you ask me where this chūnibyō is, this occurs at random times when the MC seems to have a personality disorder that creates a megalomaniac version of him that only seems to have painful (shameful) thoughts and you know what that's not necessarily bad, far from it, it's great in a villain. The problem is that the villain is also the protagonist, which makes it impossible not to find the way he acts, thinks and speaks funny thanks to these sets that form his psyche (did I forget the place that has a villain flavor? oops) there are several examples of wonderful villains who have some or even all of these sets of personalities like Aizen, Sukuna and I would say even Dio, these villains are supported by two things from my point of view: charisma and their power, one of these two cannot be missing if you You have these two things, you can forget the rest if you want motivations, plans, past, it doesn't matter if you have that. As you can see in my text, the protagonist's charisma is confusing to say the least because the author was very quick to show and develop his personality in relation to power, I explain in the skills. 2• Ways of acting of some characters: They act hastily in relation to the mc, at least those who are not ignored, that is, Akeno and Raynare, it is strange to say the least how quickly they began to treat the mc with confidence and even attraction, since he turned one into a slave and the other has known him for two weeks, the other characters have so little dialogue in relation to these two that it becomes a little strange if you compare them to them. 3•Skills: The Author modified the magic system, especially human magic, making the wizard's magical element more important than it was in the original, at least I think, since even in the beginning where the protagonist is learning magic we only have two paragraphs that explain almost nothing about this subject and finally add, a basic spell like "mana steps" that I think the author doesn't realize how stolen the ability to run at a speed that surpasses the senses of even a supernatural being is . It's a huge exaggeration, especially since with such a useful spell, the demons should have their own version of it (seriously, why don't the demons that showed up have this!?!??!?!) There are a few more things I want to explain further , I'm afraid my perversion in writing great things has gone too far, I'm just going to keep my word to talk about the MC's power here, he gains power at an accelerated pace as he himself says to Kiba "In the space of just over a week , somehow, I reached you all." and like all fast-paced things, I don't think his power gain was good because he's human, a human wizard, who knows what? four different spells? ☝️•The stupidest thing about me writing this is that the author might just write “you're asking too much of a fic” so I'm going to have to go along with that because that's the truth.

Paracausality
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