It is definitely worth the read. Great story with a very interesting concept with a mishmash between historical, sci-fi, fantasy, and apocalyptic themes. The flirting and teasing have humor to them, which I do enjoy. Yes, in the description, it indeed does have Yuri. I love female-led novels, and I have nothing against Yuri, but it does get boring and repetitive after the majority of fantasy and action focused novels that have a female lead turn into Yuri, but that is just a complaint over webnovel as a whole and not this particular novel. The first night is quite slow and can drag on, but it still has an interesting and important development to the story. My only request is that chapters that include smut to be marked.
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LIKEThank you for the review! This is my first story written and I haven't read much of webnovel's fantasy/action/plot-focused with female lead, so I'm surprised that Yuri is very prevalent here. And thank you for the suggestion! From now on, all smüt chapter will be tagged for better reading experience.
It’s good so far, however I highly recommend an editor as I can see quite a few grammar mistakes i try to point out every now and then. I assume you’re not a native english speaker? It’s mostly easy fixes, mostly to help the flow
Shin_Ou:Thank you for the review! This is my first story written and I haven't read much of webnovel's fantasy/action/plot-focused with female lead, so I'm surprised that Yuri is very prevalent here. And thank you for the suggestion! From now on, all smüt chapter will be tagged for better reading experience.
I'm glad that you found it not downright horrendous then! And yes, I'm not a native speaker and this is essentially my first time creating a story. Finding an editor that matches your schedule and willing to work everyday is a little hard in my case, but I do plan for a massive editing of the available chapters in the future.
DaoistYellowBird:It’s good so far, however I highly recommend an editor as I can see quite a few grammar mistakes i try to point out every now and then. I assume you’re not a native english speaker? It’s mostly easy fixes, mostly to help the flow