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That1AsianDude
That1AsianDudeLv144mth
2024-12-01 20:01

Honestly not a bad novel for the first 100 or so chapters, and then you start getting into the 120th and 200ths chapters. For me it does go down hill quite a bit as at this point of the novel the MC gets separated from his wife and is forced to fight humans in another world for a chance to get back with his wife. This arc consists MC meet bad guy, MC beat bad guy only for bigger bad guy to come. Repeat this about 7 times for about 80 chapters with the fighting scenes basically being “hulk mad, hulk smash, hulk get more bad, hulk smash more” on repeat as well. Honestly it’s not even that bad until at the end of reading those 80 chapters you’ve come to find out that you wasted about an hour or two of your life when the MC’s system comes back after updating for 50 chapters and takes him away as well as penalizing him by separating him and his hoard on their way to finding his wife as well as reducing his power up time for “abuse” of glitching the system while it was updating when it wasn’t really even his fault as the system threw him in the middle of a battlefield and went to update with his only chance of surviving being his glitched ability. Honestly I’m just upset and venting as I feel like I could’ve just never read this entire arc as there was no point in it, saved myself an hour or two of eventual annoyance and the novel would’ve been better in my opinion, but that’s just my opinion.

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Espiritu_Santu
Espiritu_SantuAuthor

Fair enough. But I don't really know how to make progress on it so I just took a risk. But the ban of the system would only be a few chapters now that I read your review.

Erick_Elias_9072
Erick_Elias_9072Lv2

then it's a total waste of time thank you very much. 👍

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

any nerf is bad doesnt matter for what reason, even plot reason = bad.

Espiritu_Santu:Fair enough. But I don't really know how to make progress on it so I just took a risk. But the ban of the system would only be a few chapters now that I read your review.
jayjay_123
jayjay_123Lv13

Agreed

PsyLoRD:any nerf is bad doesnt matter for what reason, even plot reason = bad.
SimpleReaderPassin
SimpleReaderPassinLv4

damn right. A good example is God of Highschool. The needs were annoying af

PsyLoRD:any nerf is bad doesnt matter for what reason, even plot reason = bad.
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