That1AsianDude

Honestly came looking for gold ingots and found a stack of diamonds.

Honestly didn’t expect it but I enjoy it so it’s a W in my books

Apologies if I came on heavy with the review, I just needed to vent and I kinda feel like a dick now. But honestly I like the concept of the novel, I think your novel’s unique and interesting and liked reading it, that’s why I got upset. I’ll keep reading your updates and root for your success.

Honestly not a bad novel for the first 100 or so chapters, and then you start getting into the 120th and 200ths chapters. For me it does go down hill quite a bit as at this point of the novel the MC gets separated from his wife and is forced to fight humans in another world for a chance to get back with his wife. This arc consists MC meet bad guy, MC beat bad guy only for bigger bad guy to come. Repeat this about 7 times for about 80 chapters with the fighting scenes basically being “hulk mad, hulk smash, hulk get more bad, hulk smash more” on repeat as well. Honestly it’s not even that bad until at the end of reading those 80 chapters you’ve come to find out that you wasted about an hour or two of your life when the MC’s system comes back after updating for 50 chapters and takes him away as well as penalizing him by separating him and his hoard on their way to finding his wife as well as reducing his power up time for “abuse” of glitching the system while it was updating when it wasn’t really even his fault as the system threw him in the middle of a battlefield and went to update with his only chance of surviving being his glitched ability. Honestly I’m just upset and venting as I feel like I could’ve just never read this entire arc as there was no point in it, saved myself an hour or two of eventual annoyance and the novel would’ve been better in my opinion, but that’s just my opinion.

"Ultimate Edging Ability"

I wonder how the Mc would’ve faired had he experienced what they experienced, definitely wouldn’t have said what he said.