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2024-11-09 23:14

The biggest issue with this novel is the protagonist. From what I read he seems to just be spoonfed power from the system and the side characters. Basically everything is done for him and anybody could take his place. The protagonist has an extremely high responsibility running the country and yet he doesn't actually run it? instead the system guides him on a leash like he's an idiot on what to do next, while his staff also make all the important decisions and the mc just plays along with the majority opinion. So far he hasn't shown any talents of his own which in my opinion is essential for any protagonist to have to make the novel interesting. Im Willing to boost my rating and continue reading if this changes tho if anyone knows if it gets better👍

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Thanks for a realistic look and warning. I would have been completely annoyed with that type of MC

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