Item: Reincarnated with a Country Creation System
Rating: 3.2
Author: MobsterShark

MobsterSharkLv155mth

2024-08-26 21:19

Got about 12 chapters in. The dialog is pretty weird. Not terrible. Feels unnatural. The MC is a hypocrite who adds nothing to the story even though it is about him. A random time skip happens with no mention from the author? Overall it seemed like a mess thrown together and called a story

Reincarnated with a Country Creation System

SorryImJustDiamond

4.0

205 Chs

Liked by 20 people

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ANTI_GodLv11

basically it's trash?

4mth

MobsterSharkLv15

Yes

ANTI_God:basically it's trash?

4mth

PolttLv15

yeah, I agree. Pretty much a pig could do what the main character does. Just say yes to the system as it and what summons does everything.

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MorgonpissetLv12

I haven't read the book but the synopsis compelled me to check out its page. It’s a mess(the synopsis) with terrible grammar and structure especially considering it's supposed to be attention-grabbing. I'm baffled that it caught my attention for all the wrong reasons. I almost want to leave a bad review just based on that but I'll settle for a comment on one of the non-5-star reviews.

2mth

MewmoewerLv13

dialogue seems AI haha

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Reveal spoiler

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It’s a “SorryImJustDiamond” Book what did you expect

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Review after 110+ Chapter. While reading this novel i have noticed 3 problems. 1: It has way too many plot holes, certain things Don't make sense. We are introduced to too many things all at once and honestly most of them Don't make sense. 2: For me personally at least, the narrative is very confusing. Many Important things are not explained and this creates a lot of confusion. 3: I'm sure at least some people reading this has realized, the words and sentences feel like they are A.I generated. I personally Don't think that the author is at fault for using it. I've seen many others use it mostly to fix spelling mistakes and such. But the amount of the Unity, Friendship and other nonsense is just too much in this novel. I sincerely hope that author see my review and try to fix some of these problems in the future, i Believe this novel has great potential and i am also a fan of Author's previous works which is why this is bugging me even more than usual.

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AaatEaeLv14

MC serves 0 purpose like everything is handled by system & the people it's summoned. even after 100 chapters, MC is still a dumbass who just sits around and does fuck all & contributes nothing to the country he was given. y'all go read something else with some depth

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MewmoewerLv13

I am at ch 60+ however it is different from your other works are you using AI on this?

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