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m3gah1tss
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2024-08-04 17:07

Three paragraphs and I can see the heavy lack of punctuation marks. Grammarly free can easily solve that problem. Ps: how you write reviews with less than 150 characters?

Last True Remnant of Old Valyria

Daeranyx_Drakonar
4.3
68 Chs

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Daeranyx_Drakonar
Daeranyx_DrakonarAuthor

I will see what I can do and yes I shouldn’t ask for review

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m3gah1tss
m3gah1tssLv4

No, I meant that I was trying to write a review, with only one sentence, but I could not, since I did not achieved less than 150 characters. You should totally ask for reviews and powerstones Good Story.

Daeranyx_Drakonar:I will see what I can do and yes I shouldn’t ask for review
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SleepySmile
SleepySmileLv14

you put space " " it count as character

m3gah1tss:No, I meant that I was trying to write a review, with only one sentence, but I could not, since I did not achieved less than 150 characters. You should totally ask for reviews and powerstones Good Story.
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This is first work so be magnanimous forgive my shamelessness. If you like my work do leave reviews here

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It looks promasing I will edit this review after chp 30 ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..………………

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