If you do not have content to write then don't write why make us waste our time . you wrote one chapter about him and wasted 6 chapters for your stupid and chapter numbers.

The World Background and character Interactions are top notch but the Story Development ruined this Masterpiece. I know it was a bad decision to Ally with Targaryens but it still continued believing Author's abilities and he miserably failed me. Whatever i guess. Read it if you want the author have putted enough time in this but the MC is not up to my tastes

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Three paragraphs and I can see the heavy lack of punctuation marks. Grammarly free can easily solve that problem. Ps: how you write reviews with less than 150 characters?

It looks promasing I will edit this review after chp 30 ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..………………

Too ret@rded for my taste, the author gave him the Essence of the blank, along with the memories of Dumbledore and Grindelwald, with the essence, he should've mastered everything on the memories and improved it drastically, but no. He can't even do basic s*it, he runs away from Sheepstealer with his massive war dragon which fought two other war dragons and won, sustained injuries to his dragon from Sheepstealer while running away, them proceeds to fight. What ret@rdation.

good start can't wait to see how it goes

Don't you drop! I am already interested reading the title.

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