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2024-10-06 06:37

Todo iba bien hasta el capitulo 49, "justo antes de poner todos los capitulos de pago" se volvio loco y mejoro el talento aleatoriamente de muchisimas personas para que el mc ya no destaque tanto y parezca otro del monton y como si no fuera suficiente, le regala un systema de beisbol al rival "que obviamente es el as de su antiguo equipo" no pierdan el tiempo

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Well, I guess I'm not that predictable since you didn't guess anything right about what happens in the future of the book hahahaha! Anyway, thank you for reading and sharing your opinion! Feel free to come back anytime!

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Seguiría leyendo, lastima que hay que pagar para leer y no tengo money

HcS10:Well, I guess I'm not that predictable since you didn't guess anything right about what happens in the future of the book hahahaha! Anyway, thank you for reading and sharing your opinion! Feel free to come back anytime!
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