Author here. Well, we've reached 50 chapters in the story, so I thought it would be a good time to do a review. This is the first book I'm writing, so I'm always open to suggestions and critiques. Feel free to ask any questions here. Some important points: - The MC is only 14 years old, so it's normal for him to go through phases where he's arrogant, rebellious, in love... He will mature a lot throughout the story. - This isn't a story where the MC quickly becomes invincible and OP, you can expect a lot of training and truly challenging opponents. - There is romance, but don't expect anything too soon since the MC is only 14 years old. - I intend to develop various different characters, and most of them will have their own journey, so don't worry if you like a specific character and are afraid they'll be forgotten. - The story is a mix of comedy, romance, and slice-of-life, but the main focus is baseball. You can also expect a bit of drama.

A very interesting sports novel. Good use of a baseball system and pacing is commendable as well. My only complaint is with the MC. I find his character very annoying. He feels more like an annoying side character. His friends Kenta or Ren would make a better MC, but that's just my opinion. I hope there's character development.

Very good novel dont drop author. Big potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

So far I’m through 96 chapters and I must say it’s really good for the authors first light novel. Minor inconsistencies here and there, but overall a very solid story. The overall quality is even better than some veteran LN authors. Main thing is I haven’t gotten the brain rot from overwhelming plot armor or blockheadead things and poor grammar. Would def recommend to any sports LN enthusiasts.

good work man keeping going. it pleasure to read this novel

Great story with a character that shows development at a steady pace and is passionate about the game itself. Only issue is the drop in update speed

I’m a big fan of this story, my only complaint is that the update frequency is not consistent and I would love to have more chapters to read.

Amazing story with a gradual progress that isn’t too fast paced but also isn’t slow with a working protagonist who is not just muscle but has a good baseball iq, only downside might be the inconsistent chapter updates

it's good. It's just that i don't have money. so i can only say keep it up. and msg me if this has limited free thing.