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2024-08-31 03:10

I would give this a perfect five but their are minor things that irk me a bit and of course their more of nitpicks then actual judgements. A bit of the history and the characters are a bit flawed the clock tower explanation is a bit off but the biggest one is the use of how they refer to Homunculus as Androids Androids do exist in lore I believe but their used in different name. Golems, constructs, living Dolls. But calling Einzbern Android just irks me. It would almost be like calling Mordred and Android to. Android Sounds mechanical in nature while homunculus is biological.

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