KaitheSovereign

The story as a premise is good, I like the Humanity priority mentality. My review would have had a better score but whatever Ai your using to translate/help write is making very robotic word choices. I’m nearly caught up and I can see a chapter or two that are fine then three chapters that are all really robotic Ai is fine but after finishing the chapter I would suggest to go over it and manually fix the vocabulary of each chapter. Like for real it’s like “how can he track my vector direction” or things like that it grating in my senses more so then Chinese glazing or heavy Chinese terms. I’ll keep reading hoping you improve but if it keeps up past chapter 100 I may take a break from this story

Ho-oh your next opponent has been decided.

Alphamon or Omnimon could smack the lore accurate arceus around like it’s child’s play. And their are many digimon stronger then them. Alphamon ouryuken beat digimon equalivalent if arceus in Yggdrasil and overthrew it. Jupitermon in the time stranger games erases multiple timelines with a punch.. so yeah I say digimon are stronger.

And then Billy was never seen again

I know you may be busy but please do reread over chapters to fix names, it’s a good story but I didn’t even know who this character was until I saw dratini scarf

Positives: The Story has a cool concept for a system The Updating schedule is good The characters aren’t Chinese stereotypes (for most part) Translation is at least legible The Pokemon combination moves and unique typing of the arbok is cool Negatives: The Story itself claims to want to use Pokemon that wouldn’t shine shine. The beedrill is the only Pokemon a lot of people don’t use from the point I’m reading at. (Not translators fault) A lot of the items don’t say what they do (not translators fault.) The names aren’t translated in constant natures sometimes they will use an English name then a lot of the chapters it’s Chinese names. the only names that are always correct are Kenji and The Pokemon names. Talking like they are in a cultivation group sometimes with Chinese terms. Team R just being Team Rocket in my eyes I rather the original author just say it was team Rocket. ——- In conclusion it’s a 3 out of 5 not terrible, not great but it’s readable and it has some good moments wish the original author actually wrote pokemon that aren’t used, imagine a raticate beating a Garchomp. The translator is doing their best but I do wish they cleaned up the chapters a bit changing the names into the English names they sometimes place. Characters get lost in shuffle if the Chinese name is suddenly used and you have no ideas whose who.

I’m sure if it Runeas her personality would get a kick out of the whole situation. We also don’t really know the extent of how strong she is, I would think maybe not ajuka or sirzechs but a bit below Zekram. Then again that’s subjective her personality is th best part about her.

Sweet child rice shower is to precious

It’s a good concept and I like the idea as a whole. The translator is doing a good job but at the same time it suffers from what many Chinese fics suffer from. Seemingly flawless (sometimes stupid) main character who has a hint of power stronger then others then immediately throws themselves to do whatever they want an strong arm any woman the writer wants to be in a harem as a harem member. Turning goddess into harem members just because he promises something and they immediately agree? No dice. So in conclusion, Transaltion is decent, Main character is just a collector of women with a arrogant attitude the more power he gets. The system is nearly non existent giving powers over the most random of events and not just powers immediately overpowered busted powers. So yes like most translated fics I’ve read on this app it’s a bit Chinese fanfic slop I wish the translator continued luck but This fic isn’t for me.

Omnimon Merciful mode, Omnimon x, Alphamon an other could beat the true form of arceus if that says anything basic Omnimon would struggle but still put up a fight. Jupitermon broke time itself wiping out multiple timelines if that says anything to.