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DevilsArray
DevilsArrayLv54mth
2024-08-17 06:07

It's a pathetic novel. The mc is nerfed due to pathetic author. Dropped after chapter 3. You can be miserable, you be not cunning, you can be naive, but you cannot be stupid and foolish. 19years old and you take a beating for money to denied? Na man, that doesn't happen, the opponent fighter will not allow that, the local gang will not allow that, evn the cops will be interested in his testimony. So yeah it was pathetic

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Shadowwarrior_007
Shadowwarrior_007Author

Thank you for reading.

The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

the best reply to be given

Shadowwarrior_007:Thank you for reading.
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv12

don't listen to him, you're doing great

Shadowwarrior_007:Thank you for reading.
Shadowwarrior_007
Shadowwarrior_007Author

thank you

Demiurge_Ohara:don't listen to him, you're doing great
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TheReadingGuy
TheReadingGuyLv5

FACTs

lyonciv0
lyonciv0Lv3

as a fellow author this has to be the best reply and look at your novel now. that's why it is good to ignore and reply modesty good work 👍

Shadowwarrior_007:Thank you for reading.
Shadowwarrior_007
Shadowwarrior_007Author

haha, thank you!!

lyonciv0:as a fellow author this has to be the best reply and look at your novel now. that's why it is good to ignore and reply modesty good work 👍
Salazarson
SalazarsonLv1

So you only read 3 chapters and didn't delete a one star 'disputable' review and were polite, yeap I'll start reading

Shadowwarrior_007:Thank you for reading.
Sravan_Patri
Sravan_PatriLv1

YOU READ 3 CHAPTERS 3

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Always funny seeing people with completely failed novels say “as a fellow author” As a fellow failed author maybe

lyonciv0:as a fellow author this has to be the best reply and look at your novel now. that's why it is good to ignore and reply modesty good work 👍
chanmam20
chanmam20Lv15

ifs funny seeing someone who failed as an author telling others they failed

Kw0z:Always funny seeing people with completely failed novels say “as a fellow author” As a fellow failed author maybe
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

My fanfic which I wrote like 16 chapters for has the same amount of collections as your novel with hundreds of chapters. I’d say you’re 10x more failed

chanmam20:ifs funny seeing someone who failed as an author telling others they failed
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Lv3

i just realized you are an author and just chuckled . okay whatever makes you feel comfortable

Kw0z:Always funny seeing people with completely failed novels say “as a fellow author” As a fellow failed author maybe
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

My fanfic with 12 chapters has nearly the same amount of collections as your novel with 130+ chapters. If that doesn’t tell you how garbage you are at writing, I’m not sure what will

lyonciv0:i just realized you are an author and just chuckled . okay whatever makes you feel comfortable
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Lv3

yes and ????

Kw0z:My fanfic with 12 chapters has nearly the same amount of collections as your novel with 130+ chapters. If that doesn’t tell you how garbage you are at writing, I’m not sure what will
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Inferiority is a tough thing to grasp

lyonciv0:yes and ????
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Lv3

i know you are a living example

Kw0z:Inferiority is a tough thing to grasp
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

? Not sure if you need to take an English class or what, but that made no sense, bud. I see what you were going for though

lyonciv0:i know you are a living example
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Lv3

Okay, but no need . Am done exchanging words with you Have a good day

Kw0z:? Not sure if you need to take an English class or what, but that made no sense, bud. I see what you were going for though
DaoOfRizzness
DaoOfRizznessLv4

Blud thought he was a real author. Create your own story and plot and we'll judge that. Stop creating fanfics and create your own.

Kw0z:? Not sure if you need to take an English class or what, but that made no sense, bud. I see what you were going for though
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