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HungryWolf2024
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2024-08-03 11:14

Read up to chapter 6 and felt the story was way too vanilla, what of Homeland was good , no deviation, no plot, just what if. Not bad but a little bland. Child friendly version of an adult series.

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Having read to 21, nothing much has changed, the author has talent and with a different story, can do way better. However choose to tackle a very adult themed series and make it pg13. Drop this series and refocus on something like Marvel, your only doing a disservice to yourself and the story. Maybe Homelander in Marvel, not The Boys.

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Is mc villain or hero?

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Is there harem in this novel?

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