HungryWolf2024

Thanks for the feedback, honestly wasn't my best plot, it went better in my head and tied in to certain things I wanted to happen. I was going to have Tywin take part and kill Aethan himself, but considering I was limited by Tywin's age. It would have come off as reckless, I also wanted to present a viable option for Aerys to free up Rhaella. So I kind of wrote myself into a corner.

if your asking if I'm going to give him stronger enemies. Yes and no, there will be some changes moving forward. Definitely the White walkers bit for the rest, I intend to make them interesting since the timeline will change.

Appreciate it.

Yeah I forgot that 😅, but I don't think the drama was excessive as this was a torney during a relatively peaceful time. it wasn't about what was done but to who. Velaryon was a declining House, but they still had close ties to the Crownland. Plus Aegon intentionally made a big deal. it'll make a little more sense int he upcoming chapter. but thanks for the feedback.

it happens sometimes with me. I need an editor.

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lol.

lol, my bad.

Can't give it away if your asking about the prophecy.

I'll give it a read.