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PragmaticoLv154mth
2024-10-10 18:59

Read what was free. MC isn’t a sociopath but he isn’t the wannabe hero either. Grammar can use some touch ups as well as the inconsistency in the names used for the envoys. Updates seem stable. The MC isn’t very well described nor anyone else as well. Just basic height and build if that. World background is a zero at the moment. We don’t know how big the city is where in his world they are or any significant structure or features nearby. Also MC hasn’t tried to expirment with his group fusing materials really either. Conversatuons are off putting for me. They seem very rigid and formal even in situations where you would speak casually but that could be a cultural barrier. Wish the story luck but not for me

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Raoj_NfeLv4

I have to agree with you. Its a well structured story however there are parts that make it difficult to read as like we are not drawn into the story.

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