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#nosystem #smartluffy Eyy! great book so far, with a different take on luffy's journey. I have read lots of fanfics where they start as luffy or whatnot but this takes on a whole new approach concerning his pre-journey and his interactions with the world, tho it feels a bit awkward at first especially the awakening of haki but nothing major besides, other authors have done worse, at least the author here made luffy train to get his power and not got it hand down from a system. Hope to see some romance development in the future. Keep up the good work and please dont drop it!

Dude makes all luffys enemies stronger cause he made luffy op. dawg you havd op in the tags, why are you trying to nerf him? And then having Arlong know haki and it's advanced forms? really? 😒

story is good, but the pacing is shit, it took genius fluffy almost 6 months to learn haki, and u expect nami and USOOP, the great coward to develop haki in a couple days ?

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Already read all the Chapter, Definitely became one of my Favourite One Piece Fiction keep up the good work Author and this Fiction i highly Recommended 👍👍👍👍👍

One thing to say about this fanfic is that... It is worth reading like I don't say about fanfic but this got me hooked I don't want to talk about the story as it will be spoilers but just read it you will not regret it

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Muito bom, engraçado e divertido,a velocidade de aumento de poder é meio exagerada,mas o autor já falou que vai trabalhar nisso,no geral a obra é realmente cativante