story is good, but the pacing is shit, it took genius fluffy almost 6 months to learn haki, and u expect nami and USOOP, the great coward to develop haki in a couple days ?
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My friend, no offense, but if you're saying that the Luffy I wrote about took 6 months to learn Haki, then I just want to say that it took him less than 3 months to learn Haki, and that's with him training alone without engaging in combat. If he had trained by fighting, he would have learned it much faster, which is the case with his crew, who not only have his guidance but also fight with him all the time, which is something he didn't have and did everything by trial and error without any help. That's all, I just wanted to leave this comment. I'm not saying I'm right, so I could be wrong anyway.
it took the original luffy under guidance from rayleigh 6 months to use all 3 forms properly and consistently, I'm using that as a basis
But this fic takes place in an alternate universe, my friend, where things are different, like the strength of the characters. Since it's my first fic, there are some inconsistencies, but just keep in mind that this isn't the original Luffy.
you didn't answer on how Nami & Usopp learned Haki in days.
I haven't read it yet. But i assume the potential of ussop and nani is different because its an AU. Plus ussop learned obs haki in dresrosa somehow with it being shown when he trained it. So he could be a monster talent for all we know.
without it being shown how he learned obs*
Already read all the Chapter, Definitely looking forward for the more Chapters in the Future. Keep it up Author 👍❤️👍
