#nosystem #smartluffy Eyy! great book so far, with a different take on luffy's journey. I have read lots of fanfics where they start as luffy or whatnot but this takes on a whole new approach concerning his pre-journey and his interactions with the world, tho it feels a bit awkward at first especially the awakening of haki but nothing major besides, other authors have done worse, at least the author here made luffy train to get his power and not got it hand down from a system. Hope to see some romance development in the future. Keep up the good work and please dont drop it!
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LIKEYou know, adding the tag #nosystem to a fanfiction novel isn’t really an advantage. In fact, it’s a significant flaw not to include a system in a fanfiction story. Now, I’m not saying that novels without systems aren’t good, but boasting about having the tag #nosystem isn’t something to be proud of. The best fanfiction novels usually include a system, and it’s much better when there’s one in the story, anyway this fan fiction is amazing even without system so it’s good