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NeaCambelt
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2024-07-22 13:08

Trop d'info et bla bla inutiles faut raccourcir surtout que c le début de l'histoire alors c le moment pour gagner des lecteurs [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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gamermax_bg_3508
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what?

BridgeToHeavens
BridgeToHeavensLv4

Que?

Vaneford
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Don't worry about him his a professional hater

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TheHarvinator01
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newer
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Here is a translation (I do not judge the comment in itself as I still didn't read the FF) : Too much information and useless yapping, it should be shortened since it's the story's beginning it's the moment to catch readers.

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