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NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv15mth
2024-07-22 13:08

Trop d'info et bla bla inutiles faut raccourcir surtout que c le début de l'histoire alors c le moment pour gagner des lecteurs [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

BNHA: Spiritual Aura

lordanl
4.1
105 Chs

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gamermax_bg_3508
gamermax_bg_3508Lv4

what?

5mth
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BridgeToHeavens
BridgeToHeavensLv4

Que?

5mth
2
Vaneford
VanefordLv3

Don't worry about him his a professional hater

BridgeToHeavens:Que?
4mth
1
TheHarvinator01
TheHarvinator01Lv4

3mth
4
newer
newerLv3

Here is a translation (I do not judge the comment in itself as I still didn't read the FF) : Too much information and useless yapping, it should be shortened since it's the story's beginning it's the moment to catch readers.

2mth
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ExistentialVoid
ExistentialVoidLv4

This guy is on to something. It takes 16 chapters for the MC to get out of the hospital. That's 16 chapters for about 3 or 4 days... It's really slow.

1mth
1
Other Reviews
lordanl
lordanlAuthor

Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one

3mth

Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4

I see a lot of non-relevant and erroneous information released in the story that takes away the desire to read a little, like lengthening something like the prologue too much.

5mth
Xilt
XiltLv3

The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?

3mth
tentalagim
tentalagimLv4

Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.

3mth
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

It is less than 10 chaps review, but it is good so far; the prologue seems long, but it is easy to read and has potential. will there be lemons?

4mth
HobessXD
HobessXDLv3

So far, so good it's kind of a sad start. Having a prologue was better than I died and what not. It was a nice change of pace. The characters introduced so far are good they have plenty of personality and emotions. I'm looking forward to where it goes from here. I skimmed around the first half prologue part 2 TMI for me, but don't let that deter you it's still a good read. That's the one thing I didn't like and figured I'd give you a heads up just in case. Once again a good read with a lot of possibilities.

5mth
Wyvernian_Gaming
Wyvernian_GamingLv14

This story is so far really entertaining to read. While it is a slow burn for now, it's a nice mix of slice of life and info/training. Can't wait to see how the story progresses through UA.

3mth
mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5

It is for ruined my day with the prologue ................................................................................................................

3mth
BurglarOfTurds
BurglarOfTurdsLv15

Reveal spoiler

1mth
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