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BurglarOfTurds
BurglarOfTurdsLv156mth
2024-11-06 01:53

it's well written and and interesting idea to me, but 40 chapters in and it's just constant depression and self blame. the constant info dumps are boring and distract me lol. oh and at this point, don't expect the Mc to actually care about anyone. author made it so he's such a whiny loser that he's already given up on making friends, lovers, family members, he has those, but doesn't want them to be a distraction because his whole purpose to become stronger is so he can protect his mommy in his next life, if he gets one lol. I really enjoyed this for a bit, info dumps waiting but whatever, but I'm just tired of reading it lol. whatever progress does get made in personal relationships seems like he doesn't want it, but just goes with the flow to not upset anyone

BNHA: Spiritual Aura

lordanl
4.1
184 Chs

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lordanl
lordanlAuthor

Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one

8mth

Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4

I see a lot of non-relevant and erroneous information released in the story that takes away the desire to read a little, like lengthening something like the prologue too much.

9mth
Xilt
XiltLv3

The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?

8mth
tentalagim
tentalagimLv4

Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.

8mth
NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1

Trop d'info et bla bla inutiles faut raccourcir surtout que c le début de l'histoire alors c le moment pour gagner des lecteurs [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

9mth
TheHermitKing
TheHermitKingLv14

Reveal spoiler

3mth
mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5

It is for ruined my day with the prologue ................................................................................................................

8mth
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

It is less than 10 chaps review, but it is good so far; the prologue seems long, but it is easy to read and has potential. will there be lemons?

9mth
HobessXD
HobessXDLv3

So far, so good it's kind of a sad start. Having a prologue was better than I died and what not. It was a nice change of pace. The characters introduced so far are good they have plenty of personality and emotions. I'm looking forward to where it goes from here. I skimmed around the first half prologue part 2 TMI for me, but don't let that deter you it's still a good read. That's the one thing I didn't like and figured I'd give you a heads up just in case. Once again a good read with a lot of possibilities.

9mth
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