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Smittie6359
Smittie6359Lv153mth
2024-07-31 01:18

Great read so far, my only real complaint with this is the lack of world building. That being said the story works just fine as is and does not suffer from the lack of background.

Online Game: Starting with an SSS-Level Plundering Talent

BigWhiteGoose
4.6
300 Chs

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Typeshitnakjda
TypeshitnakjdaLv2

would you like to read my novel ?

3mth
The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv12

hey could you perhaps check out my novel as well. I'd like to know your thoughts on it. it's not as good as this, probably, but I still love to know what you think

2mth
Smittie6359
Smittie6359Lv15

Which one, you have two started.

Typeshitnakjda:would you like to read my novel ?
1mth
Thakur_Abhay_3246
Thakur_Abhay_3246Lv3

Bot. don't really..trash plot random drug rap...d .. stranger fms fall in love after rap..d... another FMC is brain dead no world building tons of trash Chinese tropes...

1mth
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Rastis_D
Rastis_DLv13

I came here because of the shelter game and found another novel worth my time. So many throw SSS on the cover and just OP from go. This character has a true SSS skill that takes thought and care to fully utilize. Thank you for not just "Here's an SSS and your a god". This will be one that I keeps me looking for the next chapter.

3mth

STILL_HARD
STILL_HARDLv3

author is there Yuri or ntr type thing in it not a fan of it

2mth
Xolu
XoluLv3

I absolutely love your book(John especially) , (if you can). Can you spread the love by checking out my book Dove And Crow by Xolu.

2mth
Jordzfml_7
Jordzfml_7Lv3

good story. the way the mc treats sini at night honestly disgusts me , like bud she's crying from pain and literally no mention of pleasure . it makes me skip the entire chapter , please improve .

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hmah
hmahLv15

This is one of the best novels i've ever read. The MC is moderatly overpowered with a great plotline and world building. Just need to adjust some information cause it's confusing . Otherwise I really love the story and most of all the mc who is overpowered but not arrogant. Keep up the good work.

2mth
BWbear
BWbearLv1

It's hard to describe my feeling of reading this book. The plot of the novel is very interesting, and I really like the story design, which gives people a sense of gradual progress and good rhythm!

3mth
Blazzing18
Blazzing18Lv15

I really like this book so far and hope it keeps going! But there r 2 things that suck.. the first is that some pages take more then 1 pass or take a lot of coins... like can u not be so greedy!! And the secis about the book.... Y is the MCs attitude kinda a shity especially when hes screwing the girls!!?? He doesnt give a shit if there im pain or not and honestly its bullshit and something needs to be done about it!! It doesnt matter if its a book or real life u dont to what the MC is doing and for an author ti actually write something like this shows what kind of person u r and its going to make people not want to read anything u put out!!

1mth
Joseph_Coble_1389
Joseph_Coble_1389Lv2

It has a good story. Just don’t understand why the main character wants to cause pain to the women he’s with.

1mth
Brett_Gilmore
Brett_GilmoreLv15

great story. power system seems kinda backwards given the sheer number of attributes being plundered. the biggest problem though are the terrible lewd scenes. worst I've ever read hands down. not even a single one is good.

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