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Blazzing18
Blazzing18Lv152mth
2024-10-02 12:20

I really like this book so far and hope it keeps going! But there r 2 things that suck.. the first is that some pages take more then 1 pass or take a lot of coins... like can u not be so greedy!! And the secis about the book.... Y is the MCs attitude kinda a shity especially when hes screwing the girls!!?? He doesnt give a shit if there im pain or not and honestly its bullshit and something needs to be done about it!! It doesnt matter if its a book or real life u dont to what the MC is doing and for an author ti actually write something like this shows what kind of person u r and its going to make people not want to read anything u put out!!

Online Game: Starting with an SSS-Level Plundering Talent

BigWhiteGoose
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Rastis_D
Rastis_DLv14

I came here because of the shelter game and found another novel worth my time. So many throw SSS on the cover and just OP from go. This character has a true SSS skill that takes thought and care to fully utilize. Thank you for not just "Here's an SSS and your a god". This will be one that I keeps me looking for the next chapter.

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Jordzfml_7
Jordzfml_7Lv3

good story. the way the mc treats sini at night honestly disgusts me , like bud she's crying from pain and literally no mention of pleasure . it makes me skip the entire chapter , please improve .

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Xolu
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I absolutely love your book(John especially) , (if you can). Can you spread the love by checking out my book Dove And Crow by Xolu.

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STILL_HARD
STILL_HARDLv3

author is there Yuri or ntr type thing in it not a fan of it

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hmah
hmahLv15

This is one of the best novels i've ever read. The MC is moderatly overpowered with a great plotline and world building. Just need to adjust some information cause it's confusing . Otherwise I really love the story and most of all the mc who is overpowered but not arrogant. Keep up the good work.

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Joseph_Coble_1389
Joseph_Coble_1389Lv2

It has a good story. Just don’t understand why the main character wants to cause pain to the women he’s with.

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BWbear
BWbearLv1

It's hard to describe my feeling of reading this book. The plot of the novel is very interesting, and I really like the story design, which gives people a sense of gradual progress and good rhythm!

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John_Kula
John_KulaLv4

Reveal spoiler

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ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortalLv13

The best thing about this novel is its pacing. In 200 chapters MC of other novels usually just crosses newbie phase, while here it's almost endgame near ch. 230. The plot is decent enough. Cons - - Worst R 18 scenes I've seen. Like seriously author bro if ur gonna copy paste at least copy from someone else's novel. All your scenes are exactly the same with only different names. - Inconsistent names used I recommend it if u can ignore the cons

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